Book Info
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Project Leader:
tonydonell
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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Tony's 3 Poems
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Clever poems, especially the last two. I loved the closing line of "End" and the playful nature of "Net."
good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
You have a very nice way of writting, very realistic and at the same time comedic, I enjoyed the few french words that made they're way into you're poems, I find it gave them a little extra something. Your writting is brilliant and quite clever, many different levels explored.
I congradulate you, and I vote a yes.
I congradulate you, and I vote a yes.
Always a Yes! vote from me, wonderful talent Tony, a pure gift to read, love Wennie xxxhugs
Tony,
The combination of all three poems display quite a complete and alluring package in your talent...!
Intelligence, wit, humor, profundity, cryptic thinking and more...!
Publish and WRITE ON...!
Joanne ;-)
The combination of all three poems display quite a complete and alluring package in your talent...!
Intelligence, wit, humor, profundity, cryptic thinking and more...!
Publish and WRITE ON...!
Joanne ;-)
Whether it's poetry or prose, your writing is always interesting, clever and thought provoking. I just don't know if I'd want a baby to come out feet first - ouch!
Thumbs up!
Thumbs up!
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I enjoyed reading your poems. I Think? is clever and deep, it has many levels. But I liked "End of the Whorl" most.
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I had some good laughs with these. They're clever and humorous.
I voted Publish.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
I voted Publish.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
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Tony, interesting offerings, all. I've voted. Good luck to you.
If you have the time, stop by at...
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
If you have the time, stop by at...
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
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I liked how all of them flowed and am happy to give you my vote.
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I just want to emphasize how clever I found Net - Didn't Work.
Well done!
Well done!
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General:
My favorite poem: Net Didn't Work.
My favorite lines (from I Think?):
I think of god as a comedic genius
Brandishing men with a thing called a penis
Adding insult to injury - a giggling surprise
Every man's toy is of varying size.
Form:
Some of your rhymes and lines are beyond compare. You show a true mastery of the sword which is the pen.
Content:
Birth, death, and dating . . . you've got it all!
Imagery:
Just love the image of God as a comedic genius.
Good Luck!
My favorite poem: Net Didn't Work.
My favorite lines (from I Think?):
I think of god as a comedic genius
Brandishing men with a thing called a penis
Adding insult to injury - a giggling surprise
Every man's toy is of varying size.
Form:
Some of your rhymes and lines are beyond compare. You show a true mastery of the sword which is the pen.
Content:
Birth, death, and dating . . . you've got it all!
Imagery:
Just love the image of God as a comedic genius.
Good Luck!
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