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8/28/2008 07:43 AM PT
I think I posted, although I cannot be sure. Its a great place this, I do hope it posted.
8/26/2008 12:59 PM PT
Just posted "Daphne, Reprise" yesterday. Feedback?
Also, if you like it, I'm thinking of converting it to my own project and posting the rest. If you could, could you tell me what you think about that?
Also, if you like it, I'm thinking of converting it to my own project and posting the rest. If you could, could you tell me what you think about that?
8/25/2008 09:44 AM PT
This is a great idea =D I think its nice to see what younger people can write as well.
8/24/2008 05:24 PM PT
Posted "Rapunzel and the Witch" yesterday. Read please?
8/24/2008 10:22 AM PT
hey
i just posted something of mine called "That Roller Coaster Moment"
hope you guys read it
and some feedback on it would be great
i just posted something of mine called "That Roller Coaster Moment"
hope you guys read it
and some feedback on it would be great
8/21/2008 11:21 PM PT
i just signed up, where do you go to publsih your writing.?
8/20/2008 12:16 PM PT
Ok, I clicked on "start a new story" and I copied and pasted my story and clicked on the post button, but I have no idea if it went through.
8/19/2008 08:37 PM PT
im new on this...where does one write their work/poetry?..just here???
8/19/2008 07:34 PM PT
One observation: the pieces at the bottom of the list have far fewer feedback compared to those at the top - perhaps you could rearrange the order a bit?
8/19/2008 02:25 PM PT
Hi, I'm 18 and this group seems to be great. I've put up two short stories and one partial one, and it would be great if you could look it over.
8/18/2008 08:03 PM PT
I've been looking for a site like this for quite sometime. I'm so happy I found it! I just turn 16 last week and I love writing so this is an amazing site!
8/18/2008 03:41 PM PT
Me too!
8/18/2008 05:21 AM PT
Is there a young writers group? If so, I want in!!
8/18/2008 05:19 AM PT
Hey, I just turned 15 this year in April. I have been wrighting for about the last 4 years of my life. I knew I was young and that I had to do a bit of growing up for my words to make sence to any one but me. It just so happens I have been working of a story for the last 3 years of the four. I found out that my old ideas were fine, and that even being a little girl all I had to do was rewright what I had already writen. I am so new to the world, but so not new to wrighting. So the thing I have learned from this, is that rewrighting is key, and that I was never alone. (sorry on spelling)
8/17/2008 07:11 PM PT
i'm 19, been writing for 2yrs now it started my sophomore year of high school. Well i'm out of high school now n have been writing like crazy ever since so let me know what u think. I've written alot of poems so it may take awhile to get them all up here.
8/17/2008 06:11 PM PT
Im 14 and new to this, so i woudl apreciate some comments on my work, its called final blow...please respond
8/17/2008 12:19 PM PT
Hi. I'm 15 and new to the group. I've written a short story called "Jack Gully." It's my first submission to the group. I'd love it if you'd review it for me.
8/17/2008 11:40 AM PT
I'm new here. I'm 18 and I've submitted 3. Be sure to check them out.
8/17/2008 06:06 AM PT
HI I'm new to all of this I'm 16 and love writting poems
i would appreciate any feedback for my poem "Inner workings of a deep dark place"
i would appreciate any feedback for my poem "Inner workings of a deep dark place"
8/16/2008 09:15 PM PT
Hi, I'm also new to this whole thing, and I've been writing a book since like three summers ago...I'd love feedback, and I think you'll like the book. It's not finished, but I think you'll see yourself in it. Thanks.
8/15/2008 01:59 AM PT
I am 18 years old and new to this. I'm not sure how to go about this so I only posted one of my poems. Check it out and tell me what you think. If i like how this goes I'll post more.
8/14/2008 10:13 PM PT
really cool i liked it :)
8/13/2008 07:05 PM PT
Men only dream of problems we can achieve,
Please halt on what you preseve,
Teens Kids Children are what they proclaim,
Don't listen to what they say your not the same,
We are the future to the rest we are the best,
We rise from the ashes nevertheless,
We are strong even when wrong,
We must move along and repeat like a new song,
We are the force to never break the earthquake,
For heavens sake life isn't a piece of cake,
Power is in the eyes of the weapon moving,
Grooving but your mind your really loosing,
No drug abusing generations reusing,
Recycling kids who are refusing,
To live life concluded polluted,
Please stand by your minds being rebooted,
In thinkings absence jump your conscience fence and use common sense,
Life is ours live to the fullest,
Shoot the mental gun if you've got guts to pull it,
Please halt on what you preseve,
Teens Kids Children are what they proclaim,
Don't listen to what they say your not the same,
We are the future to the rest we are the best,
We rise from the ashes nevertheless,
We are strong even when wrong,
We must move along and repeat like a new song,
We are the force to never break the earthquake,
For heavens sake life isn't a piece of cake,
Power is in the eyes of the weapon moving,
Grooving but your mind your really loosing,
No drug abusing generations reusing,
Recycling kids who are refusing,
To live life concluded polluted,
Please stand by your minds being rebooted,
In thinkings absence jump your conscience fence and use common sense,
Life is ours live to the fullest,
Shoot the mental gun if you've got guts to pull it,
8/12/2008 11:40 AM PT
I can never come up with an idea and stick with it, before i get writers block and lose interest. Lol. I aint much of a writer these days, although i want to be. I love writting im just not very good at it.
8/12/2008 12:11 AM PT
I'm not really good at making poems and other literary pieces so i just sent stories
8/12/2008 12:09 AM PT
i agree sometimes I think that the stories i wrote is rubbish
8/11/2008 06:09 PM PT
just take a chance, everyone can relate to you in some way or another. vvv
8/11/2008 04:28 PM PT
I don't know if I should put my story up or not.\I'm just scared in case everyone thinks it's rubbish.
8/11/2008 02:53 PM PT
I am under 20 and I was wondering if there is a space open for me. Thanks.
8/11/2008 12:56 PM PT
check out my poems im 19...ima pretty good writer would love some feedback thanks
8/11/2008 11:42 AM PT
check out my story, and my poem if you want,
my story is the sweet sound of love, the only review was pretty good
my story is the sweet sound of love, the only review was pretty good
8/11/2008 10:36 AM PT
i think joining we books was a good idea
8/11/2008 09:20 AM PT
What a wonderful idea! I'm so glad I found this website; I've been trying to find a way to connect with other young writers. I might submit something I've just written; I'd better get on it, though, 'cuz I'm about to turn 20 in September! :P
8/11/2008 09:17 AM PT
Hey ,I've just joined ,i have already summited some work and im really excited .
I love poetry ,
although can somebody help me , how do you upload a picture of your self ?
I love poetry ,
although can somebody help me , how do you upload a picture of your self ?
8/11/2008 06:37 AM PT
This project includes poetry, so feel free to post. And feel free to look around, too- there are some great poems I've already seen!
8/10/2008 05:10 PM PT
does this Project include poetry?? if it doesn't can someone please let me know of any good ones please, thank you
stuart witham
stuart witham
8/9/2008 11:08 PM PT
hey i just started here & i just posted 2 works of mine . they aren't my best (far from it) but they were the first ones i could find stored somewhere in my mess of a laptop . if anyone could qive me some feedback it would be pretty awsome .
8/8/2008 09:43 AM PT
hey im new to the webook communty but if any of you who likes some dark, mysterious fantasy writing, then read my prologue of "The Prophecies". Cheers in advance to anyone who takes a quick looky.
8/8/2008 08:36 AM PT
Hi, i'm new to this type of thing, i'm still not sure whether or not i want to post any of my work on here yet. But i will read some, i'm a very big fan of reading books. So i will leave comments on what i think of your work.
8/8/2008 06:27 AM PT
No problem. ; )
8/7/2008 07:18 PM PT
I can? well. I apolagise :D
8/7/2008 08:33 AM PT
Darkwingstalker, another great way to share your work is to create your own WEbook book project. It's very easy- message me if you have questions.
Also, to the general group members, this is really not the best place to advertise your writing. A far better option is to leave some reviews for other writers, and then they'll try to reciprocate. I'm personally trying to read everything, but it does take a lot of time...
Also, to the general group members, this is really not the best place to advertise your writing. A far better option is to leave some reviews for other writers, and then they'll try to reciprocate. I'm personally trying to read everything, but it does take a lot of time...
8/7/2008 07:43 AM PT
http://dwhighconcept.blogspot.com/
Its got most of my work there, And you can comment without a Username. It lets me ost more then the 3 limit here :)
Its got most of my work there, And you can comment without a Username. It lets me ost more then the 3 limit here :)
8/6/2008 07:19 PM PT
hey ive never really posted anything before...if you could read my poem "The Bleeding Continues" and give me some feedback it would help out alot...Thanks
8/6/2008 01:43 PM PT
hey guys my name's ashley i'm new to the group and it be cool if you could give me some feedback on my poem "what you will" i'm not one to share my writings with anyone so this is new to me.
8/6/2008 07:26 AM PT
I just thought I'd shamelessly plug my short story, as that seems the thing to be doing. I'd appreciate any feedback anyone feels they'd like to give.
8/5/2008 02:39 PM PT
Very nice job. You should submit this for publication next voting cycle. Great project. Original idea. Wonderful read.
, B_Anderson, S.C.O. [Scriitore il Claza Operator]
, B_Anderson, S.C.O. [Scriitore il Claza Operator]
8/5/2008 09:10 AM PT
Thanks 4 the invite!!! I look forward to being a part of this project!!
8/4/2008 09:26 PM PT
If you've got some time read my "To be, to give, to love, to be lost." I always appreciate feedback.
8/4/2008 04:55 PM PT
submitted "Moon Shadow". please be honest...
8/4/2008 01:06 PM PT
Just submitted "The clifftop". Be gentle ;)
8/4/2008 09:09 AM PT
rance, I'm messaging you replies, since you asked so many questions. ; )
8/4/2008 08:53 AM PT
Drew- get involved. edit other peoples' writing, and leave constructive comments. if that still doesn't get you anywhere, there are a number of people who will edit your writing specifically if you agree to edit theirs.
8/3/2008 11:49 PM PT
just curious,
by "top writers" you mean,
that just not ANYBODY under 20 can post here?
just curious.
i'm over 20 anyways...
if that's not the case,
shouldn't it be just "writers under 20."
;o)
(hope you don't find my comment tastless)
also, i think it'd be awesome if you can read the age of whoever post (optional)
i mean, like you read the thing and then read:
AGE 12,
and be like: WOWZA!!!
another idea,
you should let the twenty-pluses post poems if they were written when they were twenty-minuses.
but i guess you've got enough submissions already.
c ya
by "top writers" you mean,
that just not ANYBODY under 20 can post here?
just curious.
i'm over 20 anyways...
if that's not the case,
shouldn't it be just "writers under 20."
;o)
(hope you don't find my comment tastless)
also, i think it'd be awesome if you can read the age of whoever post (optional)
i mean, like you read the thing and then read:
AGE 12,
and be like: WOWZA!!!
another idea,
you should let the twenty-pluses post poems if they were written when they were twenty-minuses.
but i guess you've got enough submissions already.
c ya
8/3/2008 06:50 PM PT
Just of curiosity, what's the best way of getting exposure these sort of sites?
8/3/2008 05:26 PM PT
Hey everyone!! So yah i just joined this website and it's sweet to be able to submit my writing. Read War of the Girls and send me feedback!!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! it'll help so much cause i'm always looking to improve my writing! :)
8/2/2008 04:43 PM PT
Hey,
I just joined this site right now to see what it's about so yeah,
I posted the one short story i've written "The Sweet Sound of Love." I mostly right poems, so yeah. Give me some feedback i guess, or just talk to me.
I just joined this site right now to see what it's about so yeah,
I posted the one short story i've written "The Sweet Sound of Love." I mostly right poems, so yeah. Give me some feedback i guess, or just talk to me.
8/2/2008 12:48 PM PT
I just joined this site about 3 minutes ago and I'm not sure I fully understand how to use it but I've submitted two pieces, I hope some of you will read and review =]
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7/31/2008 07:06 PM PT
I'm 19 years old and have five poems up for reading. Check them out if you'd like, I think I fit the prerequisites.
7/31/2008 04:30 PM PT
I love this place.
Finally a place i can release my emotions.
A great idea!!!!
Finally a place i can release my emotions.
A great idea!!!!
7/30/2008 11:22 PM PT
So, hello. I'm new here.
Haven't a clue how to used this damn site, but I figure I'd give it a whirl.
Enjoy.
Haven't a clue how to used this damn site, but I figure I'd give it a whirl.
Enjoy.
7/30/2008 10:42 PM PT
I just turned 17 a few days ago, but I've been creating stories since I learned to write. I started a novel at 12 and finished it, but I continue to work on it among other works, including several short stories. I'd like some feed back; constructive criticism and the like.
7/30/2008 07:18 PM PT
Congrats to everyone! Constructive criticism is the BEST thing you could ever have for your writing career.
7/30/2008 03:14 PM PT
Would enjoy feedback.
7/28/2008 11:57 PM PT
THIS PLACE IS AWESOME<33333
im 13, and most of my work isn't recognized too much >.<
probably because i suck...
im on here for 2 reasons
1. to improve [through constructive criticism]
2. to get known
i just began on two "books".... check them outt?
im 13, and most of my work isn't recognized too much >.<
probably because i suck...
im on here for 2 reasons
1. to improve [through constructive criticism]
2. to get known
i just began on two "books".... check them outt?
7/28/2008 03:39 PM PT
Greetings,I will enjoy the feedback, and being able to get some important issues that people ignore or take for granite out to get peoples attention. I Love God, Hope, Life, My Family. I thought i figured out i knew my self but God was fortunate enough to show me that I am still learning, i am 19 i never knew how hard it wolud be to have a baby, take care of home, work and go to school, i am young but trying my hardest. Most of my poems are about struggle, God, Or are inspirational. I hope to get a lot of feedback.
7/28/2008 12:30 PM PT
Hello, to whomever reads these comments, I saw this umm group or wutever this is and I was really interested, becuase I myself am 17 and I have been writing since I was 7, so I would love for people to review my work! So if any of u get the chance please check my work out! thank u in advance!
urs truely,
Neela
urs truely,
Neela
7/28/2008 08:36 AM PT
Nevermind, I suppose it just took twenty-one clicks.
7/28/2008 08:34 AM PT
So, I wrote a poem, placed it in a "start new story" page, and pressed "post for feedback." And nothing happened. I pressed it another twenty odd times and still nothing. Can someone help me with this?
7/28/2008 07:36 AM PT
im glad to know someone thinks im worthy of being a "top" writer. but ill be 21 soon. so im sorry but i dont think i really apply to this group.
7/28/2008 06:56 AM PT
I think we should take the best pieces from this group and compare them to those of the older writers.
7/28/2008 03:27 AM PT
I'm 19 and I'm a faith writer...which means I write for God and write with faith that God tells me what to write...I've got a bunch of stuff but am not sure what i'll put up yet so i'll figure it out later.
7/27/2008 06:03 PM PT
such a great opportunity for people my age....thanks
7/27/2008 03:24 PM PT
I'll put something up sooner or later
7/27/2008 01:44 PM PT
I'm Seventeen--
This is a great idea! Am totally about to submit a small piece.
This is a great idea! Am totally about to submit a small piece.
7/27/2008 11:36 AM PT
17, just about to submit an article or two
7/25/2008 01:00 PM PT
I'm 18, and I'll submit later. quick question, can we submit stuff that we have on fictionpress?
7/24/2008 10:24 PM PT
I wrote 6, just check them out and tell me what you think
7/24/2008 06:33 PM PT
Thanks for this! I suppose I'm old compared to most of this lot [17, but still]. I'll be sure to submit later!
7/23/2008 02:18 PM PT
Yeah i just started Webook
im 14 and this is a grrrreat way to get known
im 14 and this is a grrrreat way to get known
7/22/2008 03:50 PM PT
thanks for the awesome opportunity...I'm only 15.
7/22/2008 09:06 AM PT
thanks for this great opportunity...im 15
7/21/2008 07:38 PM PT
Party on, kids.
7/21/2008 03:55 PM PT
thanks for the opportunity! i hope you like the poem i submitted :-D
7/21/2008 10:51 AM PT
Hey guy! I am 23. I think this is a great idea though, just wanted to know if you still wanted me to be apart of it since I am over the 20 mark.
7/21/2008 07:08 AM PT
ok, project leader here again. i've more or less sorted the stories submitted, as of 10:07 EST July 21st, in order of number of feedback per piece i'm not totally done, but I'd rally appreciate it if you took a look at the peices at the top of the project, espeicially those with no reviews.
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
Thank you!
-saraelizabeth
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
Thank you!
-saraelizabeth
7/20/2008 10:41 PM PT
Hey! I'm 22. Do I really look that young?
I'll be 23 soon...
I'll be 23 soon...
7/20/2008 09:04 PM PT
I'm 15 and glad to be given a chance to contribute. :)
7/20/2008 06:40 PM PT
i submitted six. hopefully people will let me know which ones are best. i'm also trying to read others work and leave comments as well! this is a great idea!
7/20/2008 04:28 PM PT
I'm 23 but I guess I can just try to read and comment then. +_~
7/20/2008 12:41 PM PT
Awesome! i'm only 14 and I would love to submit a s hort story. i'll have to get working. :)
7/20/2008 09:46 AM PT
i will be all over this when i get the chance!
7/20/2008 08:06 AM PT
awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
7/19/2008 07:01 AM PT
Hooray! The younger group gets some recognition! Definatley sounds like fun. I'll do it!
7/18/2008 07:57 AM PT
You can totally contribute, either with something old (as long as its never been published before) or new. Your choice.
7/17/2008 12:58 PM PT
am i allowed to contribute? i'm 14. i'll be 15 in august. i have poetry and essays already written or i could write something if you ask me to. this sounds like a cool idea.