Book Info
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Project Leader:
saraelizabeth
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
All Participants -
Category:
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Genre:
Short Story
Literary -
Language:
English
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Top Writers Under 20
Why "Top Writers Under 20?"
Because age doesn't limit creativity, and this site's seen some amazing talent from writers under 20 years old.
This project is, more than anything, a showcase of WEbook's best work by its youngest writers. Obviously anyone 19 years of age or younger is qualified to submit, and submissions may be in the form of poetry, short stories or creative nonfiction essays of any genre. Write about whatever- but submit your best stuff! SUBMISSIONS ARE LIMITED TO 3 PER WRITER ... more »
Because age doesn't limit creativity, and this site's seen some amazing talent from writers under 20 years old.
This project is, more than anything, a showcase of WEbook's best work by its youngest writers. Obviously anyone 19 years of age or younger is qualified to submit, and submissions may be in the form of poetry, short stories or creative nonfiction essays of any genre. Write about whatever- but submit your best stuff! SUBMISSIONS ARE LIMITED TO 3 PER WRITER ... more »
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I'm 14 and working on what will, hopefully, be a novel. When it is finally submitted, hopefully it will read better than it does now!
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I'm only fourteen (just turned!), and my aunt and mom say I write like a published author (they read A LOT of books), and agree. I'll post the preface of the first book I wrote on this site, Midnight's Plea, and if anyone likes it they can read more. I want to finish at least ONE book I've wrote on this site.
I also need more motivation to keep writng, so can someone please chack it out?
I also need more motivation to keep writng, so can someone please chack it out?
I'm thirteen right now and I'm going to be posting some short stories :)
i hope you enjoy them <3
i hope you enjoy them <3
Hi, I'm 16 right now, and I'm submitting a poem that I wrote a year ago around Autumn. I hope you like it. :)
I'm only fifteen and have at least 9 submissions up in here that I'd reallllyyyy like to be looked at. Maybe they aren't book worthy, but I just want to work on my skill until I can get there...
I am onlty thirteen but I really want my boom to be published. please give me feedbacks if you can . THX!!
I have alot to share with everyone. And I'm only fifteen (b-day in a couple of weeks, tho) but I have really creatvie story ideas, and a prodigy like kick for writing. I just really want to share what I have, and hear what other people think. I am currently writing a book about a girl with ADD, and like, a superhero action thing (kinda slow on that one, tho, I prefer writing it with Microsoft Word). So, if any of you guys are interested, please read, and please feedback!! THANKS!
Hey guys this is SWIMBUG96 and I have a story i am writing called in my head i would really apreciate it if you gave it a chance and maybe read it and gave some feedback cuz beleive me i need it and BTW i am so qualified I am only 13 HAHA
I am currently 22 years old but the work I am submitting was written when I was 17 or 18. Please read Inheritance and give me feedback. Needless to say I have been waiting for a site like webook to come around for a long time.
sorry i'm not qualified. Only my profile picture qualifies. But surely, thanks for the invite.
It was hard for me to pick just three. But this is a great idea to showcase old souls and that wisdom doesn't necessarily come with age. But with experience.
Sky
Sky
I'm a ripe old 21, so I won't be throwing anything into the pot, but I'll have to check out some of the content if I get the time.
Good idea.
Good idea.
I've been writing songs for my new album that I'm currently recording, and last week I was on First Click for my project. I don't believe I ever mentioned that I was 19 anywhere, but I am. I have two submissions: "The Second Time Around" which is about the second coming of Jesus at a Waffle House and "Chuck and Abe" which is about a road trip with Charles Darwin and Abraham Lincoln. I hope you all enjoy.
Hey everyone,
My name is lashley and I have recently had a few poems published, but I am asking that anyone who is reading this message to check out Father, Lori's Dance (this one is my favorite), and My Eyes on this project or any other poems I have on my profile. I am trrying to get as many votes as possible and any advice you have to offer is greatly appreciated. If you do decide to check these three poems out I would be estatic if you left a comment or any suggestions that might help me to improve my work. Thank you to everyone who takes some time out to read these.
-lashley
My name is lashley and I have recently had a few poems published, but I am asking that anyone who is reading this message to check out Father, Lori's Dance (this one is my favorite), and My Eyes on this project or any other poems I have on my profile. I am trrying to get as many votes as possible and any advice you have to offer is greatly appreciated. If you do decide to check these three poems out I would be estatic if you left a comment or any suggestions that might help me to improve my work. Thank you to everyone who takes some time out to read these.
-lashley
Can we distribute small passages or chapter of novels? Or is it strictly poetry and short stories?
If submissions are limited to 3, "SUBMISSIONS ARE LIMITED TO 3 PER WRITER." why are there so many writers with more than the 3 limit?
Posted a new poem called "Dancing in a Hurricane"...check it out:) and feedback is always welcome
Love to join, but I'm 22 in a week. Sorry love. But thanks for the invite. I'll be sure to review a few pieces!!
I wouldl ike any feed back on my project. I would like to post something here if thats ok. Heres the link to my project: http://www.webook.com/project/The-pain-love-and-hatred-i-fell
I joined recently and am posting chapters to a romance/teen novel. It isn't very well written, and I could use any type of advice. It is located on my home page and is called "Learning to Let Go". Thank you!♥
hey i joined a few weeks ago and am currently posting chapters from a novel that i am working on
you can find it at my homepage and i would appreciate any feedback, positive or negative
thanks
amz
you can find it at my homepage and i would appreciate any feedback, positive or negative
thanks
amz
Check mine out im Fourteen and mine is kinda bad but its called The Orb of RIn and I could use any advise that anyone would give me, I could use it! :)
i have awaken from my dormant state to post something again...
in the confessional, check it out. (am writing this coz im afraid that it may be lost within the whole horde of submission...)
in the confessional, check it out. (am writing this coz im afraid that it may be lost within the whole horde of submission...)
Hey I really like the idea and I am going to read some of the stories but, you have like a million stories right now. I don't know if it's open to any one or what but dude, edit!
Hell all,
I'm a new member to this site, so I am not sure how it all works. I joined the site because my 10 year old daughter wrote a small book of four chapters and wants to have it published. Can someone assist me as to the steps we should take to get this up and going.
Thanks
A very Proud parent
I'm a new member to this site, so I am not sure how it all works. I joined the site because my 10 year old daughter wrote a small book of four chapters and wants to have it published. Can someone assist me as to the steps we should take to get this up and going.
Thanks
A very Proud parent
hi,
i'm a new member and only have the first couple of chapters of my first submission up =)
have a quick look?
emma (16) xx
i'm a new member and only have the first couple of chapters of my first submission up =)
have a quick look?
emma (16) xx
I've only got one submission. I could do better I suppose, there'll be more to come.
writing is the best! (hey, just stating the obvious xD)
Kimmeh (14)
writing is the best! (hey, just stating the obvious xD)
Kimmeh (14)
Hey, check out my webook. It's the poetry written throughout my college career, which is just budding. I just recently turned 18, and I've gotten good feedback on the poetry thus far. Check them out. =]
Heyy im fifteen and I wrote A Papermate Pencil.
Its my first story so far.
Id love to know your opinions and and advice you might have.
Hope you like it:)
Its my first story so far.
Id love to know your opinions and and advice you might have.
Hope you like it:)
Unseen
I 'm seeing heart renching visionings/ of stories that aren't worth mentioning / these hurting and fallen girls/ these unseen glories of unsung symphonies / I can't stop the tears/ thinking of her pain/ sitting unloved by the back door/ working for this man/ she don't even no his name/ Learning that her body is a gateway/ her biggest drama isn't just a bad hair day/ theres no way/ a path of immoral worth/she burns with a desire heart full of suppressed works/ too tired her body hurts/ where is the justice/ this world is unforgiving/ that her very life is just a tool/ and her drying tears are unwilling/ I'm gonna help I promise you'll have your dream/
I cry for you/ yes real tears I weep/ cause for me your not unseen
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
an unmerciful hand/ strikes her face as she struggles/ her makeup is ruined/ but thats the least of her troubles/ He's got a grip on her wrist as she turns away to try and run/ He strikes her again in the chin/ this time she sees blood/ he screams obcenities at her/ she wasn't worth the ten stinking dollars/ now her face was ruined/ and her blood was on his fake designer collar/ He might as well let her go/and just stop the video thats ruined now/ But he paid money for her body and he'll get it/ he doesn't care how/ So he throws her on the bed/ shes getting too tired to resist/ he rips her dress off at the shoulder/ she hits/ he gets pissed/ He slams his palm into her face/ she blacks out to see pain induced stars/ he forces himself in/ thats it her only purity is gone/ Did I tell you she was a virgin/ oh well, it didn't last long/ So she finally gives up/ theres no point anymore/ she can't stop whats begun/ he treats her like a common whore/ like a store/ he can just drop by and shop/a common convenience for the needy/but for her it needs to stop/ flash forward to the end/ its a miracle she's alive/ bloody from the top down/ all around/ her hearts dead not to mention her pride/ What kind of life can she live now/ doomed to never be normal/ But someone loves you little princess/ the introduction isn't formal/ But a heart broken is a heart spoken/ a token for her pain/ Nobody will tell her about this lover/ you know him... Jesus is his name/
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
Stop complaining/ please/ I know how raw and graphic my verses sound/ while you're sadly thinking about yourself/ her immortal soul is being bound/ the underworld pulls her away/every day/ with each selling of her body/ no longer a future hottie/ scars from the naughty make her look gaudy/ Her childhood is thrown away/ because that forgiven man was greedy/ Chivalry isn't dead/ and this world is still part of the needy/ Intercede on her behalf/ please I beg you with my tears/ God can still save her and heal her heart/ and drive away her fears/ don't look at your peers/ who are they/ are they you!?/ are they called to the samething/ is your individuality lost too?!/ This song is definitely not a last/ I swear/ as long as this girl is hurting/ I'll be working/ interceding on her behalf/ I have a call that I need to answer/ I pick up its the sex slave trade/ I'll give my life for this message/ what about you..... what does God say!??
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
I 'm seeing heart renching visionings/ of stories that aren't worth mentioning / these hurting and fallen girls/ these unseen glories of unsung symphonies / I can't stop the tears/ thinking of her pain/ sitting unloved by the back door/ working for this man/ she don't even no his name/ Learning that her body is a gateway/ her biggest drama isn't just a bad hair day/ theres no way/ a path of immoral worth/she burns with a desire heart full of suppressed works/ too tired her body hurts/ where is the justice/ this world is unforgiving/ that her very life is just a tool/ and her drying tears are unwilling/ I'm gonna help I promise you'll have your dream/
I cry for you/ yes real tears I weep/ cause for me your not unseen
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
an unmerciful hand/ strikes her face as she struggles/ her makeup is ruined/ but thats the least of her troubles/ He's got a grip on her wrist as she turns away to try and run/ He strikes her again in the chin/ this time she sees blood/ he screams obcenities at her/ she wasn't worth the ten stinking dollars/ now her face was ruined/ and her blood was on his fake designer collar/ He might as well let her go/and just stop the video thats ruined now/ But he paid money for her body and he'll get it/ he doesn't care how/ So he throws her on the bed/ shes getting too tired to resist/ he rips her dress off at the shoulder/ she hits/ he gets pissed/ He slams his palm into her face/ she blacks out to see pain induced stars/ he forces himself in/ thats it her only purity is gone/ Did I tell you she was a virgin/ oh well, it didn't last long/ So she finally gives up/ theres no point anymore/ she can't stop whats begun/ he treats her like a common whore/ like a store/ he can just drop by and shop/a common convenience for the needy/but for her it needs to stop/ flash forward to the end/ its a miracle she's alive/ bloody from the top down/ all around/ her hearts dead not to mention her pride/ What kind of life can she live now/ doomed to never be normal/ But someone loves you little princess/ the introduction isn't formal/ But a heart broken is a heart spoken/ a token for her pain/ Nobody will tell her about this lover/ you know him... Jesus is his name/
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
Stop complaining/ please/ I know how raw and graphic my verses sound/ while you're sadly thinking about yourself/ her immortal soul is being bound/ the underworld pulls her away/every day/ with each selling of her body/ no longer a future hottie/ scars from the naughty make her look gaudy/ Her childhood is thrown away/ because that forgiven man was greedy/ Chivalry isn't dead/ and this world is still part of the needy/ Intercede on her behalf/ please I beg you with my tears/ God can still save her and heal her heart/ and drive away her fears/ don't look at your peers/ who are they/ are they you!?/ are they called to the samething/ is your individuality lost too?!/ This song is definitely not a last/ I swear/ as long as this girl is hurting/ I'll be working/ interceding on her behalf/ I have a call that I need to answer/ I pick up its the sex slave trade/ I'll give my life for this message/ what about you..... what does God say!??
When are we gonna wake up/
Her life is not easy/
deciding not to help its not your call/
while your stomachs feeling queazy/
If we don't help her out/
Will her life just be another/
this girl is being used for a cash source/
lost left and smothered/
this isn't just a feel bad give more deal/
her life is going too fast/
This girl lives hell every day/
she thinks her life is only good for cash/
Your not unseen
your not unseen
God Loves you
and saved you just like me
your not unseen
Hi, I'm Julianna. I'm actually 12, even though the youngest you can join as here is 14. I was wondering, how do you submit a poem? Do you just post here saying which ones to check out?
Hi :) I'm Ryan and I'm sixteen. Writing is one of my passions and I'll be sure to submit one of my poems. Most of my poems are about my life and just help me vent and I wrote nearly all of them to let out bottled emotions. Anyways check out my poetry under "Teenage Breakdown Poetry". I just jioned today so I'd love some feedbacks.
black_kat13...normally an excellent speller? (It's grammar!) x3
I think this project is a neat idea and I'll be sure to submit. ^_^
I think this project is a neat idea and I'll be sure to submit. ^_^
Yo! My name's April and I want to finish something I can be proud of. Most of my stories are based on real people, which is why I like writing fiction stories the most. Being a cat lover, I'll always figure out a way to fit them in. :3 I'm normally an excellent speller and grammer may not be my strong point but I always have Microsoft Word to help me out. When I get a project up I'll be sure to submit it here! =D
Hey, everyone!!! My name is Felicity, I am 14, eight grade, and I luv to write!! I havn't submitten anything, but i have definatly started writing!!! Lol. Oh, and my spelling, yeah not the best. Well, at least when im writing comments. I love to text and IM so i get a lot of my comment spelling from that. Lol!
I just joined, so I would really, realy love some friends!! I'd love to be friends with anyone, but teenagers 13-20 exsepecially because i can relate to them more and stuff and it's fun to talk to them.
<3 Felicity
I just joined, so I would really, realy love some friends!! I'd love to be friends with anyone, but teenagers 13-20 exsepecially because i can relate to them more and stuff and it's fun to talk to them.
<3 Felicity
i've been writing quite long, like since i was 13 (now i'm 18). but nothing had ever been finished. now i'm trying to write a fanfic on tolkien's silmarillion and a series about barbie. :)
Hi, I'm fourteen. I actually only started writing when I was eleven. I only even really started reading the summer the fifth Harry Potter movie came out. I hope you enjoy the story I'm going to add onto it in like a minute and that if you read my other projects you'll like them. I would LOVE some feedback.
hey. i'm actually fourteen, but my little information thing says otherwise. don't ask me why, i'm not like ashamed of being young. but anyway, i've been writing ever since i could write really, and its just something that i love to do. controlling what can happen to a character and their life is really fun to experiment with. usually, i write love stories or things that i feel strongly about. and i think i am actually going to submit something to this project. so hopefully some of you guys read it [:
hello im 15 and i just started like five minutes ago um i've been writing sinse i was like five but just recently i've really been pushing my stories out into the world i have a gaia just incase there are any fellow gaiains here and please read my story it's called mental thanks
i am 17 and startedwriting about 2 years ago. its a great way to release anger, sadness or just what you're thinking about, and its relaxing. i would like to make writing part of my career. i hope you will check out some of my poetry.
i am also sixteen and i have not submitted anything on this project yet but i will, i hope you could take a look at my work! i want to get published and be able to become a voice in the corrupted system, check me out! i dont hold back.
Hey I am 16 and just joined a few months ago..Hope you can check out some of my work cause I love a variety of feedback! thanks so much :)
Hey everybody!
I'm new here, but have been writing for years. Up uintil recently I've been posting on a fan fiction website with my own stuff, but Id really like to get published so check out my work Through Her Golden Eyes! Its a romance with fantasy and witchcraft! Enjoy!
I'm new here, but have been writing for years. Up uintil recently I've been posting on a fan fiction website with my own stuff, but Id really like to get published so check out my work Through Her Golden Eyes! Its a romance with fantasy and witchcraft! Enjoy!
Hi everyone. I'm 18 and am new to the site. Check out my poetry under the project, "T'was Night Upon the Barrow Grove."
I'm thirteen and proud of it, because I'm probably more passionate for writing than many other people, from age 2 to 82.
I think some of the benefits of being a young writer are that you can still learn new things fairly quickly, you don't have as many distractions as adults, and your parents are there to help you figure out the hard things about writing, like publishing. Even better, if you screw up the first time you still have time to get another book out there before you're out on your own with no book and no time to write one because you're working at McDonalds full time. You can get scholarships for writing and publishing books before college, too. So, my point is, just because you're "under 20" it doesn't mean that you have no hope--it means you have MORE hope.
{insert encouraging smiley here. I dearly hope that I don't sound all school-counselor-ish.}
-Analee
I'm hellbent on getting myself published before I leave high school.
I think some of the benefits of being a young writer are that you can still learn new things fairly quickly, you don't have as many distractions as adults, and your parents are there to help you figure out the hard things about writing, like publishing. Even better, if you screw up the first time you still have time to get another book out there before you're out on your own with no book and no time to write one because you're working at McDonalds full time. You can get scholarships for writing and publishing books before college, too. So, my point is, just because you're "under 20" it doesn't mean that you have no hope--it means you have MORE hope.
{insert encouraging smiley here. I dearly hope that I don't sound all school-counselor-ish.}
-Analee
I'm hellbent on getting myself published before I leave high school.
hey, im 14 and love to write. ive only just started and really want some comments. so please check out my unfinished story called "Lost".
This is really cool!! I just joined and I've always wanted to get my ideas out there, I posted my story so please give me plenty of feedback, good or bad, and please read =D also, if anyone is looking to make a book that is a contemplation of short stories I'd love to get involved, I have a couple of ideas.
I am 16 years old. I´ve just found my love to poetry, that I´ve been suspecting of since i was 12-14 years old. I´m writing my first poems, only 10-20. But they are in my language(spanish).
But i´m doing one grade in USA, so I just wrote my first one in english. I would be very happy of receiving mails from anybody to talk about poetry.
But i´m doing one grade in USA, so I just wrote my first one in english. I would be very happy of receiving mails from anybody to talk about poetry.
I'm 14 and I finished my first novel in 7th grade. I'm effortlessly working on a new on that I think I might have to post on here.
This is great, I'm 14 and I'm working on my first novel, the first in a trilogy.
My inspirations came from Tolkien, Le Guin, Paolini and others.
My inspirations came from Tolkien, Le Guin, Paolini and others.
I have just started posting my story. It's called "Don't Let Go."
Read, review, but so far it only has an extremely short Prologue.
Read, review, but so far it only has an extremely short Prologue.
I added the first chapter in my book ^ ^ It's called Angels Coven, Please rate and leave feedback so I know what needs improving or what should be changed
So I have just joined. I am not sure if this is kosher or whatever but I have posted the first chapter of the book I have written and i love feedback! So we can be friends!
Just added my post too, titled "The Umbrella".
I'd love any feedback at all. Thanks so much.
I'd love any feedback at all. Thanks so much.
Hi, just put my first post up here "Four Fingers of Whiskey and a Lost Coin". read it, enjoy it, just please don't forget to review it ; )
I just added my three. They're "Can't," "Stream of somewhat awake-ness stuff," and "The razor." I'm about to be 20, so I guess I can't write anymore in here after that...but I've already submitted three, so I couldn't anyway.
Hey. I just joined WeBook and I need some help with all my writings. Please Rate Me!
Hey, i just joined WeBook a few days ago. I'm 18 and have contributed one short story that is actually part of a "short story trilogy." If the first two or three paragraphs don't hook you into reading the rest, I'd really like to hear why you lost interest/some suggestions to make it better.
Thanks!
--Troll
Thanks!
--Troll
i am 14 and i just joined yesterday. i have started and finished almost 16 short stories. My project online now, is my longest yet and it is still going.
i started writing durring 6th or 7th grade about scifi and romance.
i started writing durring 6th or 7th grade about scifi and romance.
I'm almost ten (in 15 days) and have just joined.
I have written honestly over twenty-eight half-finished books (and not just speech and short stories - actual figurative language and descrriptive BOOKS - narratives to be specific) on my computer and more by hand.
I have been searching and searching for a webisite or publisher to let other people see and review my stories and surprisingly, I found this by a tiny headline ad on Gmail!
So - yes! I might start some new stories and finish them, then finish the old ones.
I have written honestly over twenty-eight half-finished books (and not just speech and short stories - actual figurative language and descrriptive BOOKS - narratives to be specific) on my computer and more by hand.
I have been searching and searching for a webisite or publisher to let other people see and review my stories and surprisingly, I found this by a tiny headline ad on Gmail!
So - yes! I might start some new stories and finish them, then finish the old ones.
Im 15 and I just joined today
Ive added 3 poems to this project
and i have 36 total in my own project
so checkem all out if you would
or just a few
I started writing during the summer and kept going with it since then
Ive added 3 poems to this project
and i have 36 total in my own project
so checkem all out if you would
or just a few
I started writing during the summer and kept going with it since then
I've just joined and wouldn't mind if you just rated my poem that i wrote
thanks
thanks
I'm fifteen years old, and I joined about a month ago(but I just got around to adding stories). I think I've been writing since first grade. But I'm currently working on my fourth novel, and possibly getting ready for writing the script for my first graphic novel. Check out my page.
I'm 14 years old and I just joined, I have one project I've been working on since I was 13. I love the title: Kenos Taphos. I's greek.
hey this is my first humm hour? at WEbook... n i posted 3 items to this project...
but this 3 items are already at my blog. that's allright. right?
i also hope to get feedback on them weather they get selected or not fot the project. i hope i stand a chance.
but this 3 items are already at my blog. that's allright. right?
i also hope to get feedback on them weather they get selected or not fot the project. i hope i stand a chance.
hello I'm 16 years of age and artistically horney i must say and my ideas are vast. ive been actually writing rap music since the age of seven, and i love every minute of this website
Hiya, i've just joined WEbook, and i'm 17, i've been writing poetry since i was 15
I'm 13 and have so many ideas that I put into stories, I have none finished yet and most of my stories contain animals and lots of imagination. : )
Hi people ^^
I've just joined WEbook, and I think this idea is awesome :) I'm 15 and I love to write(not saying I'm good at it :)
I have just one question: Can we submit something that have already been put up on another site?
I've just joined WEbook, and I think this idea is awesome :) I'm 15 and I love to write(not saying I'm good at it :)
I have just one question: Can we submit something that have already been put up on another site?
i have finished three stories, working on my 4th i'm 18 years old, and exactly how do i join?
-Casey =]
-Casey =]
I am 13 and love writing. Have finished two stories already and hope to finish a third soon. I would give anything to be published. =D
themankymanv2: The youth are the future, and you are so quick to condemn them. You sir are a DICKHEAD.
I am also 13 and i have loved reading and writing since i was 6. i have already started writing my 1st novel and i hope to finish it soon! :D
Ive posted two new poems
"Lonely love" and "All we are "
Please post feedback as i have adopted a new style of writting i would like some opinions
ill return feedback
"Lonely love" and "All we are "
Please post feedback as i have adopted a new style of writting i would like some opinions
ill return feedback
im am 13 and i write all the time i hope im the youngset writer and i hope my get posted ive been writing sense the 6th grade it helps me get thur life!
I think I posted, although I cannot be sure. Its a great place this, I do hope it posted.
Just posted "Daphne, Reprise" yesterday. Feedback?
Also, if you like it, I'm thinking of converting it to my own project and posting the rest. If you could, could you tell me what you think about that?
Also, if you like it, I'm thinking of converting it to my own project and posting the rest. If you could, could you tell me what you think about that?
This is a great idea =D I think its nice to see what younger people can write as well.
hey
i just posted something of mine called "That Roller Coaster Moment"
hope you guys read it
and some feedback on it would be great
i just posted something of mine called "That Roller Coaster Moment"
hope you guys read it
and some feedback on it would be great
Ok, I clicked on "start a new story" and I copied and pasted my story and clicked on the post button, but I have no idea if it went through.
One observation: the pieces at the bottom of the list have far fewer feedback compared to those at the top - perhaps you could rearrange the order a bit?
Hi, I'm 18 and this group seems to be great. I've put up two short stories and one partial one, and it would be great if you could look it over.
I've been looking for a site like this for quite sometime. I'm so happy I found it! I just turn 16 last week and I love writing so this is an amazing site!
Hey, I just turned 15 this year in April. I have been wrighting for about the last 4 years of my life. I knew I was young and that I had to do a bit of growing up for my words to make sence to any one but me. It just so happens I have been working of a story for the last 3 years of the four. I found out that my old ideas were fine, and that even being a little girl all I had to do was rewright what I had already writen. I am so new to the world, but so not new to wrighting. So the thing I have learned from this, is that rewrighting is key, and that I was never alone. (sorry on spelling)
i'm 19, been writing for 2yrs now it started my sophomore year of high school. Well i'm out of high school now n have been writing like crazy ever since so let me know what u think. I've written alot of poems so it may take awhile to get them all up here.
Im 14 and new to this, so i woudl apreciate some comments on my work, its called final blow...please respond
Hi. I'm 15 and new to the group. I've written a short story called "Jack Gully." It's my first submission to the group. I'd love it if you'd review it for me.
HI I'm new to all of this I'm 16 and love writting poems
i would appreciate any feedback for my poem "Inner workings of a deep dark place"
i would appreciate any feedback for my poem "Inner workings of a deep dark place"
Hi, I'm also new to this whole thing, and I've been writing a book since like three summers ago...I'd love feedback, and I think you'll like the book. It's not finished, but I think you'll see yourself in it. Thanks.
I am 18 years old and new to this. I'm not sure how to go about this so I only posted one of my poems. Check it out and tell me what you think. If i like how this goes I'll post more.
Men only dream of problems we can achieve,
Please halt on what you preseve,
Teens Kids Children are what they proclaim,
Don't listen to what they say your not the same,
We are the future to the rest we are the best,
We rise from the ashes nevertheless,
We are strong even when wrong,
We must move along and repeat like a new song,
We are the force to never break the earthquake,
For heavens sake life isn't a piece of cake,
Power is in the eyes of the weapon moving,
Grooving but your mind your really loosing,
No drug abusing generations reusing,
Recycling kids who are refusing,
To live life concluded polluted,
Please stand by your minds being rebooted,
In thinkings absence jump your conscience fence and use common sense,
Life is ours live to the fullest,
Shoot the mental gun if you've got guts to pull it,
Please halt on what you preseve,
Teens Kids Children are what they proclaim,
Don't listen to what they say your not the same,
We are the future to the rest we are the best,
We rise from the ashes nevertheless,
We are strong even when wrong,
We must move along and repeat like a new song,
We are the force to never break the earthquake,
For heavens sake life isn't a piece of cake,
Power is in the eyes of the weapon moving,
Grooving but your mind your really loosing,
No drug abusing generations reusing,
Recycling kids who are refusing,
To live life concluded polluted,
Please stand by your minds being rebooted,
In thinkings absence jump your conscience fence and use common sense,
Life is ours live to the fullest,
Shoot the mental gun if you've got guts to pull it,
I can never come up with an idea and stick with it, before i get writers block and lose interest. Lol. I aint much of a writer these days, although i want to be. I love writting im just not very good at it.
I'm not really good at making poems and other literary pieces so i just sent stories
I don't know if I should put my story up or not.\I'm just scared in case everyone thinks it's rubbish.
check out my poems im 19...ima pretty good writer would love some feedback thanks
check out my story, and my poem if you want,
my story is the sweet sound of love, the only review was pretty good
my story is the sweet sound of love, the only review was pretty good
What a wonderful idea! I'm so glad I found this website; I've been trying to find a way to connect with other young writers. I might submit something I've just written; I'd better get on it, though, 'cuz I'm about to turn 20 in September! :P
Hey ,I've just joined ,i have already summited some work and im really excited .
I love poetry ,
although can somebody help me , how do you upload a picture of your self ?
I love poetry ,
although can somebody help me , how do you upload a picture of your self ?
This project includes poetry, so feel free to post. And feel free to look around, too- there are some great poems I've already seen!
does this Project include poetry?? if it doesn't can someone please let me know of any good ones please, thank you
stuart witham
stuart witham
hey i just started here & i just posted 2 works of mine . they aren't my best (far from it) but they were the first ones i could find stored somewhere in my mess of a laptop . if anyone could qive me some feedback it would be pretty awsome .
hey im new to the webook communty but if any of you who likes some dark, mysterious fantasy writing, then read my prologue of "The Prophecies". Cheers in advance to anyone who takes a quick looky.
Hi, i'm new to this type of thing, i'm still not sure whether or not i want to post any of my work on here yet. But i will read some, i'm a very big fan of reading books. So i will leave comments on what i think of your work.
Darkwingstalker, another great way to share your work is to create your own WEbook book project. It's very easy- message me if you have questions.
Also, to the general group members, this is really not the best place to advertise your writing. A far better option is to leave some reviews for other writers, and then they'll try to reciprocate. I'm personally trying to read everything, but it does take a lot of time...
Also, to the general group members, this is really not the best place to advertise your writing. A far better option is to leave some reviews for other writers, and then they'll try to reciprocate. I'm personally trying to read everything, but it does take a lot of time...
http://dwhighconcept.blogspot.com/
Its got most of my work there, And you can comment without a Username. It lets me ost more then the 3 limit here :)
Its got most of my work there, And you can comment without a Username. It lets me ost more then the 3 limit here :)
hey ive never really posted anything before...if you could read my poem "The Bleeding Continues" and give me some feedback it would help out alot...Thanks
hey guys my name's ashley i'm new to the group and it be cool if you could give me some feedback on my poem "what you will" i'm not one to share my writings with anyone so this is new to me.
I just thought I'd shamelessly plug my short story, as that seems the thing to be doing. I'd appreciate any feedback anyone feels they'd like to give.
Very nice job. You should submit this for publication next voting cycle. Great project. Original idea. Wonderful read.
, B_Anderson, S.C.O. [Scriitore il Claza Operator]
, B_Anderson, S.C.O. [Scriitore il Claza Operator]
If you've got some time read my "To be, to give, to love, to be lost." I always appreciate feedback.
Drew- get involved. edit other peoples' writing, and leave constructive comments. if that still doesn't get you anywhere, there are a number of people who will edit your writing specifically if you agree to edit theirs.
just curious,
by "top writers" you mean,
that just not ANYBODY under 20 can post here?
just curious.
i'm over 20 anyways...
if that's not the case,
shouldn't it be just "writers under 20."
;o)
(hope you don't find my comment tastless)
also, i think it'd be awesome if you can read the age of whoever post (optional)
i mean, like you read the thing and then read:
AGE 12,
and be like: WOWZA!!!
another idea,
you should let the twenty-pluses post poems if they were written when they were twenty-minuses.
but i guess you've got enough submissions already.
c ya
by "top writers" you mean,
that just not ANYBODY under 20 can post here?
just curious.
i'm over 20 anyways...
if that's not the case,
shouldn't it be just "writers under 20."
;o)
(hope you don't find my comment tastless)
also, i think it'd be awesome if you can read the age of whoever post (optional)
i mean, like you read the thing and then read:
AGE 12,
and be like: WOWZA!!!
another idea,
you should let the twenty-pluses post poems if they were written when they were twenty-minuses.
but i guess you've got enough submissions already.
c ya
Just of curiosity, what's the best way of getting exposure these sort of sites?
Hey everyone!! So yah i just joined this website and it's sweet to be able to submit my writing. Read War of the Girls and send me feedback!!!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!! it'll help so much cause i'm always looking to improve my writing! :)
Hey,
I just joined this site right now to see what it's about so yeah,
I posted the one short story i've written "The Sweet Sound of Love." I mostly right poems, so yeah. Give me some feedback i guess, or just talk to me.
I just joined this site right now to see what it's about so yeah,
I posted the one short story i've written "The Sweet Sound of Love." I mostly right poems, so yeah. Give me some feedback i guess, or just talk to me.
I just joined this site about 3 minutes ago and I'm not sure I fully understand how to use it but I've submitted two pieces, I hope some of you will read and review =]
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I'm 19 years old and have five poems up for reading. Check them out if you'd like, I think I fit the prerequisites.
So, hello. I'm new here.
Haven't a clue how to used this damn site, but I figure I'd give it a whirl.
Enjoy.
Haven't a clue how to used this damn site, but I figure I'd give it a whirl.
Enjoy.
I just turned 17 a few days ago, but I've been creating stories since I learned to write. I started a novel at 12 and finished it, but I continue to work on it among other works, including several short stories. I'd like some feed back; constructive criticism and the like.
Congrats to everyone! Constructive criticism is the BEST thing you could ever have for your writing career.
THIS PLACE IS AWESOME<33333
im 13, and most of my work isn't recognized too much >.<
probably because i suck...
im on here for 2 reasons
1. to improve [through constructive criticism]
2. to get known
i just began on two "books".... check them outt?
im 13, and most of my work isn't recognized too much >.<
probably because i suck...
im on here for 2 reasons
1. to improve [through constructive criticism]
2. to get known
i just began on two "books".... check them outt?
Greetings,I will enjoy the feedback, and being able to get some important issues that people ignore or take for granite out to get peoples attention. I Love God, Hope, Life, My Family. I thought i figured out i knew my self but God was fortunate enough to show me that I am still learning, i am 19 i never knew how hard it wolud be to have a baby, take care of home, work and go to school, i am young but trying my hardest. Most of my poems are about struggle, God, Or are inspirational. I hope to get a lot of feedback.
Hello, to whomever reads these comments, I saw this umm group or wutever this is and I was really interested, becuase I myself am 17 and I have been writing since I was 7, so I would love for people to review my work! So if any of u get the chance please check my work out! thank u in advance!
urs truely,
Neela
urs truely,
Neela
So, I wrote a poem, placed it in a "start new story" page, and pressed "post for feedback." And nothing happened. I pressed it another twenty odd times and still nothing. Can someone help me with this?
im glad to know someone thinks im worthy of being a "top" writer. but ill be 21 soon. so im sorry but i dont think i really apply to this group.
I think we should take the best pieces from this group and compare them to those of the older writers.
I'm 19 and I'm a faith writer...which means I write for God and write with faith that God tells me what to write...I've got a bunch of stuff but am not sure what i'll put up yet so i'll figure it out later.
I'm Seventeen--
This is a great idea! Am totally about to submit a small piece.
This is a great idea! Am totally about to submit a small piece.
I'm 18, and I'll submit later. quick question, can we submit stuff that we have on fictionpress?
Thanks for this! I suppose I'm old compared to most of this lot [17, but still]. I'll be sure to submit later!
Hey guy! I am 23. I think this is a great idea though, just wanted to know if you still wanted me to be apart of it since I am over the 20 mark.
ok, project leader here again. i've more or less sorted the stories submitted, as of 10:07 EST July 21st, in order of number of feedback per piece i'm not totally done, but I'd rally appreciate it if you took a look at the peices at the top of the project, espeicially those with no reviews.
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
Thank you!
-saraelizabeth
Constructive criticism is very much appreciated.
Thank you!
-saraelizabeth
i submitted six. hopefully people will let me know which ones are best. i'm also trying to read others work and leave comments as well! this is a great idea!
Awesome! i'm only 14 and I would love to submit a s hort story. i'll have to get working. :)
Hooray! The younger group gets some recognition! Definatley sounds like fun. I'll do it!
You can totally contribute, either with something old (as long as its never been published before) or new. Your choice.
am i allowed to contribute? i'm 14. i'll be 15 in august. i have poetry and essays already written or i could write something if you ask me to. this sounds like a cool idea.
Hey, all. We have a TON of new submissions (and keep them coming, please!) that could use edits. So if you have spare time, please do take a look!
I'll definetly go through may stories and pick some, and very soon upload it here!
Great idea for a project, btw!
Great idea for a project, btw!
I am twelve years young, and it's refreshing to find a place where we can express ourselves with no limitations! I'll be sure to post something. :]
Cool idea...I'm to old to participate...but go for it you young 'uns ;)
-Michael
-Michael
(By the way, if anyone's wondering why the stories shuffled, I wanted to make it easier for readers to find new pieces, and to get more feedback for the new pieces.)
I'm not going to limit it, unless it becomes a problem. But I do think anything over 5 pages single space in Word is a bit excessive
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