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Troubled Waters Poetry
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Im really impressed with your poems. Your writing style is so interesting, you made me feel like i was there in each of the poems, like i was involved. You created a story within them and made it so that it was clear to to visualise what was happening. You definitely have a lot of talent.
I really enjoyed reading all of your poems... they are unique in content and after reading so many others, I find they stood tall.
It is interesting to me how you wrote the first two submissions from another era, I really found that refreshing.
the last one was very interesting and I thought it rounded out the three for an interesting mix. I really like your style and found your imagery to be right on top, I saw, for the most part, what you were saying, and I enjoyed the word challenge of the second poem you added. clever.
This is what I find best about this poem contest... that I come across poets like yourself that I wouldn't have otherwise known.
I am interested in what else you have done, so will go to your page and see.
I think that you are interesting and individual, and that is great and refreshing.
a YES vote for PUBLISH!!!!
good luck and take care,
tuesday_rayne
It is interesting to me how you wrote the first two submissions from another era, I really found that refreshing.
the last one was very interesting and I thought it rounded out the three for an interesting mix. I really like your style and found your imagery to be right on top, I saw, for the most part, what you were saying, and I enjoyed the word challenge of the second poem you added. clever.
This is what I find best about this poem contest... that I come across poets like yourself that I wouldn't have otherwise known.
I am interested in what else you have done, so will go to your page and see.
I think that you are interesting and individual, and that is great and refreshing.
a YES vote for PUBLISH!!!!
good luck and take care,
tuesday_rayne
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I enjoyed reading all three of your poems. You have a way of painting pictures with your work. Excellent!
http://www.webook.com/project/Blackened-Rose
http://www.webook.com/project/Blackened-Rose
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Very good works, your style is one that truly intrigues.
I shall look forward to reading more of your works in the future and the very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
I shall look forward to reading more of your works in the future and the very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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This is really great work.
It is very rare to meet an artist who can paint such images with her words. I'd love to see this get published, and maybe you can help me with my work in the future...
It is very rare to meet an artist who can paint such images with her words. I'd love to see this get published, and maybe you can help me with my work in the future...
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Burst is my fave...so sad
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote
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I love the Burst Poem it is Awesome! I hope you get published.
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Excellent work. I pray they are included in the final publication. You've my vote.
Thanks for visiting...
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
Thanks for visiting...
http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems
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These poems are really special, you really have a gift when it comes to writing! I wish you the best of luck! I want to read your books forever!
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Fanatastic display! 'Hold My Breath' is tops. You have my vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were
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these are excellent, well done, you have my vote
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
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I really enjoyed the story and the imagery - you're a great writer, and one i'd like to follow... you'll surely be a star one day...
I really enjoyed the story and the imagery - you're a great writer, and one i'd like to follow... you'll surely be a star one day...
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Oh wow. A definite yes. Great work. Gripping stories wrapped up in musical verse and vivid imagery.
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Some very beautiful imagery in your poetry - a yes vote from me.
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http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
Great pieces, you got my vote
Return the favor plz.
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