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mariagrace
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English
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Twisted Tales of Truth
The poems i have selected to submit are those of truth. Though two of the submissions are written almost as fairy tale they are without doubt written from my own experience. This experience being a mother abandoned with an infant by a man whom I had financially supported for many years.
Stranger tells the story of how my sons father abandoned us and then 5 years later once his many failures plagued him asked to live with is again.
Conflict written with witches and demons tells the story of h ... more »
Stranger tells the story of how my sons father abandoned us and then 5 years later once his many failures plagued him asked to live with is again.
Conflict written with witches and demons tells the story of h ... more »
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Stranger was a sad poem, I do agree though that one should never abandon their family.
Conflict has a nice story to it and a nice rhythm. Well done.
I have You was beautiful, and made my eyes teary.
You have my vote.
Conflict has a nice story to it and a nice rhythm. Well done.
I have You was beautiful, and made my eyes teary.
You have my vote.
I love the style though maybe some of the rhyming was a bit pushed and some grammar errors - but that is for webook to decide, I've voted
I did vote yes ... but a little feedback: there are some grammar mistakes and mispellings and such. Great thoughts and expressions that could be improved upon with a little editing work. If you want to take a look at mine, it's "Destini's Trifecta". Good luck!
Nice selection. A bit verbose but you've got my vot anyway.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy
General:
Your poems are genuine and intimate in content. It is clear that you write about true experiences which adds to the emotional strength of the poems. You expressed the pain through mere description of events and use of dialogue without using cliches or being melodramatic.I especially liked how you took the voice of a child in "I have you". You managed to say everything a child would say in the way a child would say it-I actually wondered about your age after reading the poem.
All in all, you have my vote. Good luck with the contention!
Content:
your poems are genuine and intimate in content. It is clear that you write about true experiences which adds to the emotional strength of the poems.
Your poems are genuine and intimate in content. It is clear that you write about true experiences which adds to the emotional strength of the poems. You expressed the pain through mere description of events and use of dialogue without using cliches or being melodramatic.I especially liked how you took the voice of a child in "I have you". You managed to say everything a child would say in the way a child would say it-I actually wondered about your age after reading the poem.
All in all, you have my vote. Good luck with the contention!
Content:
your poems are genuine and intimate in content. It is clear that you write about true experiences which adds to the emotional strength of the poems.
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