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Project Leader:
naiveandwitty
Participants:
The WEbook community
Who Can Write:
All Participants
Category:
Poetry
Genre:
Prose
Romantic / Love
Language:
English

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all_is_one

3/10/2010 10:43 AM PST

All is fare in Life and love as It is in death and war
It is what it is nothing less nothing more
Life is like an addict lusting for more.
Stumbling through darkness you try not fall
Seeking out right in the wrong of it all.
Does it feel like the best does it feel like the worst
Both freedom and containment feel like a curse.
No limit leads you to aimless action
that’s the freedom which brings destruction
Chained to commitment rules and judgment
Leaves you no room for spontaneous enjoyment.
Life is what you make it. So make it what you like it
It’s all up to you you don’t have to fight it
So give it your best , live life like a dance
you never know this might be your last chance
Seems like forever but forever wont be long
One day my dear friend your free will, be gone.
Today has been born, tomorrow yet to come
The choices you make should not leave you torn
Give to your brother your sister and your mother
And never forget your father and your lover
Live life lovely and live in love
The most powerful gift sent from above.

bmorgan

11/1/2009 9:57 PM PST

Hello all,

I would really appreciate it if I could receive some feedback on my pieces, whether or not you actually like my work or enjoy my writing because I'm just trying to improve as a writer/poet. I shall do my very best to read and critique the writings posted on here as well, so I say thanks in advance!

Brit :)

p.s. - if you would like to, feel free to add me as a friend so we can share writings among each other!

Karma00

7/23/2009 7:22 AM PDT

This is an interesting project.
The musicality of poetry
the wonder in the detail
I don't know what I'll write for this project, but I know I'm going to enjoy it and it will keep my juices flowing. Great idea:)
Tina

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S_WilsonDisher

7/22/2009 2:47 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite - a bit snowed under at present but will get back to you!

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Zorian

7/19/2009 7:38 PM PDT

Thank you for invitiving me; I haven't used WeBook for a while, but I'll make sure to check in on this project now.

By the way, how is the Edited Free Verse project doing?

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AuroraEos

7/16/2009 4:45 PM PDT

thanks for the invite, even though it was awhile ago. I'm going through some poetry of mine from a while back. i just might post it here.

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Wilting_Rose16

7/15/2009 4:57 AM PDT

thanks for the invite i shall upload two songs i wrote and some poems because i have a few.

take care

emily

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YunaRaven

7/1/2009 1:15 PM PDT

Thank you for the project invite:)
I will post a poem shortly....

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tuesday_rayne

6/30/2009 5:22 PM PDT

strange thing... i know i'm new but where is my photo... I don't remember needing to insert something each time i submit?

tuesday_rayne

6/30/2009 5:16 PM PDT

N&W~
Thank you for the invite... i have posted a poem called
'Fraud', I do hope you like it... as all my poems, this one
is true, oh so true!!!
It has a bit of silly inside (different from my usual demise)
and i hope the overall poem is one you will enjoy.
thank you,
tuesday_rayne

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naiveandwitty

6/30/2009 8:38 AM PDT

I will edit these pieces as I go through them.

Try not to forget your name.

Read the introduction, Please.

tinaofthewoods

6/29/2009 2:16 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite...I will try to post something soon (as time allows). Thank you.

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psyche

6/25/2009 10:25 AM PDT

thank you so much for inviting me to this wonderful project....

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Moon_Kissed

6/20/2009 6:02 PM PDT

Thanks for the invite, but i am no good at poetry. Sorry, but the best of luck to you all.

Sarah :-D

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naiveandwitty

6/18/2009 4:48 PM PDT

i just ask that we all write from the soul.

Amber_Kingstone

6/12/2009 3:05 PM PDT

Alright, I'm not particularly sure what you want us to write specificly, so I'll just write something random -- but good, mind you -- eventually.

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Dimension

6/10/2009 10:59 PM PDT

I'm not very fond of getting published for some odd reason..I think it's because I never have been. Well, someone in some far away state (forgot it) wants to publish a poem of mine in an anthology but I am still unsure about it. But writing a poem anywhere is nothing I an unsure of so I accept the invite. Maybe upon publication, I'll feel like letting you have my pieces...

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addie

6/9/2009 1:20 PM PDT

naiveandwitty--
Thank you for inviting me.
I write because I like to and sometimes because I feel I need to, but I am not very good at it, I'll try for you though. lol

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