Book Info
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Project Leader:
StephanieSmith6
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Participants:
The WEbook community -
Who Can Write:
Project Leader Only (Closed) -
Category:
Poetry -
Genre:
General -
Language:
English
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WEbook Poetry Vote 2009
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Friday Night Lights was fun, and seemed a little chaotic, well done.
The War had some good imagery in it, and a nice flow to it.
Lose Yourself in Reality was clever and very well written ;)
You have my vote :P
The War had some good imagery in it, and a nice flow to it.
Lose Yourself in Reality was clever and very well written ;)
You have my vote :P
Just in case you can't find mine and would like to read...
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thanks!
tuesday_rayne
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thanks!
tuesday_rayne
My favorite, though no one asked, (I find it helpful...) is the third submission, 'Lose yourself in Reality'.
I voted YES for publishing and think that you show some really strong writing.
"The War" is a fabulous tribute to our troops, and anyone who has served our country, and I found it real, and telling, and filled with images.
"Friday Night Lights" reminded me of partying with all the girls... before I got so sick, and it really had some great imagery there, and funny memories...
good luck to you,
take care,
tuesday_rayne
I voted YES for publishing and think that you show some really strong writing.
"The War" is a fabulous tribute to our troops, and anyone who has served our country, and I found it real, and telling, and filled with images.
"Friday Night Lights" reminded me of partying with all the girls... before I got so sick, and it really had some great imagery there, and funny memories...
good luck to you,
take care,
tuesday_rayne
I enjoyed all of them.
But I liked the last one best.
"Lose Yourself in Reality"
Great Job! Good luck!
But I liked the last one best.
"Lose Yourself in Reality"
Great Job! Good luck!
"Friday Night Lights" was rhythmic and amusing It moved from image to image successfully.
Some very good poems here.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
mine if you have time.
Good Luck.
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition
mine if you have time.
lovely work tht will stay with the reader for a long time.
it begs to be published and certainly should be.
it begs to be published and certainly should be.
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