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Walls of an Emotional Prison

These are poems that one can feel, see, and hear within oneself.

Orphaned is about a young lady who is checked in to a sanitarium but thinks she is just going to a swim meet.
The Diminish of a Stalker is about a lady who was in a relationship that created a stress within her and she didn't realize how much until her ghost passes away.
Inner Darkness is about one that experiences betrayal of emotion and physical emotion.

Each one of these poems are taken from an experience of my life whether it is a young girl, a nightmare that reoccurs, to the feeling o ... more »

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naiveandwitty

8/31/2009 4:04 PM PDT

prose.

you have my vote.

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Josafat

8/30/2009 9:29 PM PDT

Great writing and a strong short-story telling tone. I like the darkness of the first two pieces, the sense of being alone, and the impending tragedy of both. I am not 100% the first two can be truly catalogued as poetry, but they are well-written nonetheless. "The Inner Darkness" is a great instrospective look at how our relationships with people can break down our ability to communicate, to understand one another, creating a darkness within that you beautifully describe. Very nice verses like "The drops of soul that leak from within / Become dried from the over abundance of occurrence."

I invite you to take a look at my submission:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209

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weepingwillow

8/28/2009 5:58 PM PDT

I was absolutely surprised by 'Stalker."

Good luck!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

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Kayzzaman

8/24/2009 11:52 PM PDT

Yes vote to you...

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Jenny_Moxham

8/24/2009 7:55 AM PDT

Good enough to be published. Voted.

And if you have the time, check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

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moxhp

8/22/2009 7:06 AM PDT

Interesting, Unique, Publish!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

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dantesfire

8/18/2009 12:08 AM PDT

Excellent, I enjoyed your work immensely, and I wish you well in the vote, thumbs up here

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SNOFalls

8/17/2009 5:33 PM PDT

Good work.

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jrichard1

8/17/2009 1:16 AM PDT

it was awesome!! you are a great writer, the endings were never what i expected and they sometimes shocked me lol... but i like that! you deserve to be published!

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tattyhead

8/14/2009 2:00 PM PDT

Good Luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

If you have time.

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MarkBrad

8/6/2009 12:25 PM PDT

your work is difficult though compelling to read, you have a very different style to most, i enjoyed trying to see through it to your inner thoughts, i wish you luck, you have my vote

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

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