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Baptism by Fire
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The year is 2086, and the human race has already made contact with an alien species of wolves, forming a superpower known as Kebria. These Kebrians that have set up colonies on Earth in Asia and the Middle East. Time goes by, and although the world leaders remain distant from each other, relations overall seem to go good with the aliens. This ends when the Iranian-European War breaks out, countries start picking sides, forming new alliance systems. With the world in a frenzied state ... more »
The year is 2086, and the human race has already made contact with an alien species of wolves, forming a superpower known as Kebria. These Kebrians that have set up colonies on Earth in Asia and the Middle East. Time goes by, and although the world leaders remain distant from each other, relations overall seem to go good with the aliens. This ends when the Iranian-European War breaks out, countries start picking sides, forming new alliance systems. With the world in a frenzied state ... more »
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What I liked about your summary is that you drew me into your story. Even for a person like me you isn't really interested in war and politics, good job.
The criticism that can be made is that you give away too much, I think. You already reveal that Nathan's story is a story of development which, I think, should be figured out by the reader and not written or said at all.
The criticism that can be made is that you give away too much, I think. You already reveal that Nathan's story is a story of development which, I think, should be figured out by the reader and not written or said at all.
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