you have my vote.

Yes! I vote amazing as always, very deserving, love Wennie xxxhugs

Three fine poems for WEbook to consider in the top 300. I enjoy your pieces here ~Perraut.

Regards,

~g

Three fine poems for WEbook to consider. I enjoyed them very much ~Perraut.

Regards,

~g

Three fine poems for WEbook to consider. I enjoyed them very much ~Perraut.

Regards,

~g

I like the informal tone, and everyday language.  It speaks to the heart of the reader clearly and is not pretentious. "2:42" is very creative and fun, but the strongest of the three is "What the Hell..."  from the title one's hooked, and asking the same question.  It flows well, and the italicized verses provide good stopping points as well as they help with the transitions.  A very powerful message, and one that I have seen a lot in recent poetry, but that you bring to life here, asking all the questions, addressing the stereotypes, the prejudice (sometimes) and the misunderstanding of the victims of abuse.  "Highway Heartbreak" was a bit frantic for me, but nice story there.

I invite you to take a look at my submissions:
http://www.webook.com/project/josafatPoetryVote209

2;42 is wonderful  Well done I like the others too
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-vote

Excellent work here.

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

Good on you, publish!

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

PUBLISH !
Your way of describing things is amazing.
You captured me with words and after reading so much dirge you were like "Lemon to my Palate"
Thank you and Good Luck..

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition


If you have the time.

I can totally relate to the "What the Hell..." poem. Very good account and description of what a woman feels for the man whois abusing her. You have my vote.

If you have a chance, please stop by and see my work as well.

http://www.webook.com/project/Timeless-Trilogy

Plenty of human interest here and on the whole well written.

Regards John

http://www.webook.com/projects.aspx?pn=johntucker

Would love to hear your views on mine lol

General:
vote submitted....

here is my link:

http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best


like what see, leave a vote and/or feedback.....

Content:
My favorite is " Highway Heartbreak "

I haven't been through a divorce, but relationships,
I understand just the same...
your words feel like conversations that  you have in your heart..
these were all enjoyable reads...
honest and emotional...
lovely work...

interesting work, you covered 3 different topics with a lot of emotion displayed in each, it's good sometimes to look at the darker side of life, nicely done, I voted yes.

3 very different, but meaningful writings...
YES!!! to the vote.


If you want to find mine:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

thank you!

these are very different, i enjoyed them, well done

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

2:42 has my vote.

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre

2:42 is recorded in blue
The doors are all closed
So that nobody knows
But they do
They do
They just don't know who
Your family's been called
They're on the way
We'll get you prepared
As we wait
Close your eyes
There will be no more tears
We'll brush your hair
With gentle care
We'll clean you up
With the utmost respect
Your wedding ring's in place
Where it shall remain
Your ride is almost here
To take you home
But I know
I know
You are already there...

Jennifer Perraut

Dedicated to all those who work in the medical field as well as anyone who has lost someone they love.