I vote Publish.

Excellent, you got my vote

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Interesting….a yes vote from me!

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A good effort. Voted.

If you have the time...

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General:
A very nice poem. It reminds of the trials of youth and the way we often behaves in our teens.
It is still very actual for those that are no longer a teen. It calls to everyone that are someone else on the outside for appearance.

Form:
The lines of the first verse is a bit cut up. They don't make much sense. Why did the writer make them like that. Is it just a coincidence?
The overall impression though is that the poem is well thought of and well written. It glides easily.

Content:
The poem has good content. She  writes from her heart, and you can sense the struggle behind it.
Some of the lines are very well written and the imagery is beautifull.

Imagery:
"When my life crumbles around me, i dance in the ruins"
- Very beautiful imagery. We all have sometimes felt our lives crumble, and to be able to dance in the ruins... it demands strength.

"Sure there are cracks, i have my moments of reality."
- The image of a cracked mask. Cracks  in perfection. The imperfection behind shines through. Very good imagery.

The describing of how she wears a mask of strength, and so admitting that she is weaker that her appearance, is moving. It reminds me of my teenage years.

Tone:
The tone of the the poem is serious and a bit depressed. Yet it is light and vigorous.
She uses a positive attitude to describe something painful and difficult that is a part of  everyone's life.

In the first verse the tone is set as quite dark. This goes through the whole poem, but in  the second verse the tone is a bit lighter. It is fresher in some sort.
The 3rd verse is again lighter. It is still dark when you look at the background, but it is also full of the hint of pride and strength.
The 4th verse solidifies it all and the finishing lines sets the finishing tone as a mix of all above.

Musicality:
The 1st verse is a bit pieced up, and the rythm is off, but the rest of the verses have good rythm. It glides easily.

All in all good musicality

Good work:-)

nice images in "pond."

also, i like the line, "I dance in the ruins," from "actress."

good luck!

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I would have to agree with LB 1968
These were brilliant. The best one was of course Less Important.

~A.J

Wonderful talent, love Wennie xxxhugs P.s. oops, publish, yes!

Your work is a powerful example of how not every poem has to have high drama to impact readers.  The child interrupting a drinking session was a worrisome situation, adopting a happy face as a protective device, as well as observing the magic of nature are all subjects others can relate to. Please continue to write and grow.

I like these three, I really do.

You have a talent of painting upon the canvas of our minds the word pictures of what it is that you share--there.

good luck.

Please stop by and take a look and give a vote at my humble offering to this project.

http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems

Again, good luck to you.

Three very well written poems - a yes vote.

I have read your work before and feel you have a lot of talent, regardless of being a teenager. These are very well written!
 
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good work ,  keep it up you, have a gift.

.http://www.webook.com/project/Hidden-Shadows

i liked these, good luck


http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Publish.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

Good work:-)

Nevermind the acting, your going to be a great writer.
I even voted to help make it so.

beautiful words. Voted

I've already read your poems and commented...