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Webook's Poetry Vote - Kail

Emotion, pure and raw.

My three, very best poems in one project to be entered into Webook's very first poetry vote :D !

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Neosierra163

8/31/2009 6:02 PM PDT

Very good, I'm not even that great with poetry and I think these're nice.

wenniepoo

8/31/2009 3:35 AM PDT

Great work, keep writing...Publish

mattj

8/30/2009 12:40 AM PDT

Excellent, you got my vote

http://www.webook.com/project/Poem-of-the-stars

LODY

8/29/2009 3:09 PM PDT

loved the pieces. Kings are gone would have to be my favorite. good job and good luck.

Felicia_L_Rader

8/29/2009 12:14 AM PDT

These are wonderful.
I can see many things from your point of view that I relate to.
Good luck!

CassandraMarie

8/28/2009 6:47 PM PDT

Great job! Broken sanity is my fav... something I'm familiar with HAHA! Good luck!!

Jenny_Moxham

8/27/2009 5:52 PM PDT

Good poems. Voted.

Feel free to check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

moxhp

8/27/2009 2:23 AM PDT

Excellent quality. Voted.

And if you have time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

Ky_the_hopeful

8/25/2009 12:14 PM PDT

Publish! :]

weepingwillow

8/23/2009 10:38 AM PDT

clarification, the last line of "your tears."

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul

weepingwillow

8/17/2009 7:24 PM PDT

the last line resonates quite chillingly. good job.

tattyhead

8/17/2009 3:41 PM PDT

You are a very good writer for somebody so young I do hope you do well.
Good Luck.

http://www.webook.com/project/Three-for-the-competition

If you have the time.

Kaoru

8/15/2009 2:19 PM PDT

If you truly are age 14 you could be bordering on a poetry savante. Truly brilliant with a wisdom that defies your age. Phenomenal talent! Vote Yes!

Stan_Cohen

8/13/2009 1:30 PM PDT

I love these, honestly some of the best I have read on Webook. Love the first and last one, breathtaking, you defo have my vote

Hope you do well

anmar1027

8/12/2009 8:21 PM PDT

outstanding poems.You have my vote.

Love,
Ana

chills

8/11/2009 10:49 AM PDT

you hot my vote could u voe for mine

KINGLOVERR

8/10/2009 8:32 AM PDT

I voted for you

penbuddy

8/9/2009 6:03 PM PDT

Lovin' these three... Great job and emotional subject. Publish...

I'd love it if you would stopped by my place and visit a while...

If you would like to read and vote on my humble offerings to the three poem vote...

http://www.webook.com/project/penbuddys-best-3-poems

Many of your friends have contributed to

http://www.webook.com/project/Reflections-of-the-Imperfections-of-Humanity-caught-in-Insanity

You are invited to contribute to that project as well.

Good luck.

MarkBrad

8/9/2009 5:29 PM PDT

well you have my vote, these were outstanding, well done

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles

Eviefay

8/7/2009 4:30 PM PDT

Three very mature poems for your age. Yes you have my vote.

mikemurphy

8/7/2009 12:39 PM PDT

For one so young your poetry is very mature - a yes vote.

naiveandwitty

8/7/2009 8:22 AM PDT

form, tone, content, imagery... great captures.

jjbellinski

8/6/2009 10:08 PM PDT

Lovely poems. You've got my vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Trilogy

Kate_Avino

8/6/2009 3:32 PM PDT

I voted for you!

tuesday_rayne

8/5/2009 5:36 AM PDT

yes, I love your style...
publish!

just in case:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

Moon_Kissed

8/4/2009 10:01 AM PDT

As always you have my vote chick. Good Luck

Sarah

Preacher1st

8/4/2009 7:31 AM PDT

I voted! How about you? Have you voted?

santackas

8/3/2009 4:14 PM PDT

Happy to put in my vote for you!!!

Izabela

8/2/2009 4:23 PM PDT

You have my vote. Good luck!

Blakkthought

8/2/2009 7:30 AM PDT

You got my vote. Return the favor plz

http://www.webook.com/project/Visions-Of-Publication

Toma

8/2/2009 7:13 AM PDT

Voted. I love your poems, I absolutely do. Voted publish.

jimmybonez

8/2/2009 4:50 AM PDT

General:
voted...

Content:
My favorite is " Kings are Gone "

Trozin

8/1/2009 8:30 PM PDT

General:
Overall well done.

Form:
Very lyrical and dramatic. Sounded like a speech that would be given in a Lord of the Rings Movies with a twist of the present world. Well done.

Content:
Deep topic packed with a relevant concern.

Imagery:
Vivid.

Tone:
Heroic.

Well Done.

~t.

AJ_Rodriguez

8/1/2009 8:11 PM PDT

General:
These are amazing Kail. I know, I've read them before, but hard to resist the read of it again. You have my vote one hundred percent.

Imagery:
The Imagery is amazing in every way.

Tone:
I like your tone and everything about it.

Musicality:
I can see this inspire someone to write a song! honestly.

TomMcGee

8/1/2009 7:57 PM PDT

Publish

RKRickerd

8/1/2009 7:16 PM PDT

Always good work from this author...publish

saphira

8/1/2009 5:44 PM PDT

Love these! Publish!

dragonriderkc

8/1/2009 12:22 PM PDT

Love it!

Izzy1804

8/1/2009 10:41 AM PDT

Definatly got my vote!

pattimari

8/1/2009 5:33 AM PDT

publish

Miz_YouNeek

6/15/2009 10:29 AM PDT

i'm voting for you my fav is your tears

Accela

6/14/2009 3:05 PM PDT

You are amazingly talented! Great job, and good luck on the vote! I'm definitely voting for yours.

AubrieAnne

6/12/2009 11:39 PM PDT

Oh! I am so happy you chose "Kings are Gone." That one really was my favorite! I'll have to show you the poems I chose! I'll send you the link when I finish the project! Good Luck!