The Girl Who Never Cries

Do you believe in fate? Wes didn't...until she met Adam. Formerly titled, "Wes."

After the death of her older brother with whom she was extremely close to, Wes Long attempts suicide. Considering herself a "failure" as opposed to being "lucky to be alive" Wes turns into someone no one would recognize. At a group therapy session she meets Adam Daniels (also a "fellow failure"). As they grow closer they begin to wonder if fate was what kept them alive...in order to find each other.

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Misunderstood_x

2/4/2010 12:34 PM PST

OMG seriously i agree with the last comment by ToriE, you should seriously get this published.
I saw the title "The Girl Who Never Cries" and wanted to read it straight away. It connects to me so much, i mean i don't know anyone who has committed suicide, but i know a lot about it... for certain reasons. I'm only 14 and i may sound stupid and you don't know me but still lol. i understand how it feels to be useless and hollow and not understanding anything about why your meant to be where you are and be who you are.
I seriously don't understand why you don't have more comments cause i love this.
Suicide is such a serious issue, with depression in teenagers and stuff and it's like you've managed to some up exactly how it feels to be an outcast, and just question everything because everything is going wrong and not making sense.
Ok i'll stop going on about the plot lol.
When i read that it was about how fate brought them together i was hoping it wouldn't turn into a romance (cause i don't tend to like them unless they include vampires or mythical things) but then when i started reading and you wrote how "it was like some sappy romance Danielle would watch" i felt so guilty for thinking it. and i just carried on reading.
I really like the structure too.
I honestly hope you do finish it, because i love the connection i feel write now with it. Maybe just for this one maybe slightly hyper 14 year old reader you could lol.

If you've read all of this thanks, but trust me this comment is so boring compared to the enjoyment i had reading what you wrote, so thanks for posting it up:)hehe x

ToriE

1/30/2010 1:41 PM PST

This is good! Why don't you finish it? I really like your style of writing, and I think you should definitely continue with this! Is there anything else by you that I can read? If you finish do us a favor and send this to a publisher! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok you must think I'm being creepy but I seriously think there is major potential in this piece.