Thanks so much ToriE and Misunderstood_x and just to let you guys know. I have NOT stopped writing on "The Girl Who Never Cries" I just need to go back through it and try and pick up where I left off WITHOUT all the notes I had. Since I'm paranoid about inconsistencies in my story (since that is one of the things that bugs me) I had every major event pinpointed to a certain date and now I don't have that so I'm either going to have to start from scratch or do my math. But I WILL eventually get around to finishing this as well as add a few more stories, since I have a million ideas running through my head. Again, thanks so much you guys and once I get back on my feet I will add more chapters.

OMG seriously i agree with the last comment by ToriE, you should seriously get this published.
I saw the title "The Girl Who Never Cries" and wanted to read it straight away. It connects to me so much, i mean i don't know anyone who has committed suicide, but i know a lot about it... for certain reasons. I'm only 14 and i may sound stupid and you don't know me but still lol. i understand how it feels to be useless and hollow and not understanding anything about why your meant to be where you are and be who you are.
I seriously don't understand why you don't have more comments cause i love this.
Suicide is such a serious issue, with depression in teenagers and stuff and it's like you've managed to some up exactly how it feels to be an outcast, and just question everything because everything is going wrong and not making sense.
Ok i'll stop going on about the plot lol.
When i read that it was about how fate brought them together i was hoping it wouldn't turn into a romance (cause i don't tend to like them unless they include vampires or mythical things) but then when i started reading and you wrote how "it was like some sappy romance Danielle would watch" i felt so guilty for thinking it. and i just carried on reading.
I really like the structure too.
I honestly hope you do finish it, because i love the connection i feel write now with it. Maybe just for this one maybe slightly hyper 14 year old reader you could lol.

If you've read all of this thanks, but trust me this comment is so boring compared to the enjoyment i had reading what you wrote, so thanks for posting it up:)hehe x

This is good! Why don't you finish it? I really like your style of writing, and I think you should definitely continue with this! Is there anything else by you that I can read? If you finish do us a favor and send this to a publisher! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok you must think I'm being creepy but I seriously think there is major potential in this piece.