What the world forgets

Abbey Conston, average looking seventeen year old to the naked eye. A closer look will reveal the track marks of drug abuse, the bruises of fights, and the vomit stains from last night's party. Can those around her save her life?

"Abbey, Come on. Admit it. You're a drug addict. Everyone knows."
Abbey Conston has lived more than any seventeen year old ever should. Her life is falling apart, and all she wants to do is ride the rollercoaster. Her life truly began, the day her brother died, the day he gave her ecsatsy.
Now she's suicidal, taking drugs and partying like the world will end tomorrow.
School is barely an option for her, and her family worries for her safety.

Can she be saved before it is too late?

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ritatan

2/21/2010 2:33 AM PST

I have read all your 7 chapters. Introduction - interesting. I suppose you will 'expand' the individual chapters? Or consolidate a few chapters into one - reasonable length as it would be in a book? Your dialogues are interesting but you could enhance the chapter if you avoid having just dialogue content ; in other words, merge dialogue with some narration/description. Well, you have writing potential - work on this.