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its sounds like lake house.  a little different but not much, i will read more to see if im interested.

it sounds nice

What a relief .. pheeew .. I asks my dad to borrow the movie The Lake House ..  and I'm glad that my story is really different from the movie, the only thing thats similar is that they are torn between different time, as the other one .. Somewhere in Time, its a bit similar in my story . . My sister told me the story, well, the one particular part thats same is that .. she's going to be on the past time . . but other than that my story is pretty different .. =D ,,, I still don't feel to continue the  novel right now, probably after a week I'll continue the novel then,,,, Thanks for telling me about it though =DDD

I actually havn't watch Somewhere in time and Lake house, some feedback also said that about the Lake House, thats the actual reason thats why I don't wanna continue it anymore,,

Hey, have you seen that movie "Lake House"? It is nearly the same as the movie. I'm not comparing but it seems like it, I plan to keep reading though

It reminds me of the movie "Somewhere in Time" with Jane Seymour and Christopher Reeves.  It's an older movie and you probably don't know anything about it. (I'm an old bag, you know)
I'm sure there's no plagerism going on here, that's not what I'm implying, sweetie.  =) 
You're off to a good start, good luck with the rest and don't stop writing.  You're doing a fine job.

fanrasywitch .. i was actually clicking motivating .. but i click practical instead .. sorry .. XD lols

Before I start reading I want to point out how good it sounds as an idea, yet (like me) you obviously have difficulty with good summeries, because not only does that need re-read to see the AWFUL spelling errors, it just doesn't suck you in the way others might do.
I'm going to read now! Looking forward to it.

that's writing ... lols

HEYS! i'M gOnNa chAnge my style in writer .. i'M gOing to do it on Sam's point of view .. cause I'm having so much trouble thinking and thinking, if I make it to sam's pov it would be so much easier for me, and tnx for every1 who have given me advice.. esp. peter :D thx pete your the best :D

sorry! so much homework I didnt have the time but I promised to read this so here I am xxx

i never heard of that movie before, but when u said it reminds u then I have to check it out .. lols to be asurre that we have the different story line .. lols I don't want to be accuse of plagiarism or something .. LMAO thanks for the heads up anyways. [=

The story description sounds really interesting but for some reason, reminds me of the movie The Lake House.

thAnks A lot guys .. :D iF u can shAre me a thought or any Idea that you think might help my work, i'M gladly to rEad it :D

Great,idea looking forward to reading the rest of it,
Distance
Is not
Of Time
And
Space,
It's
Of
The heart.

Thus far I quite enjoy it. Keep up the good writing. Interesting story concept indeed. *smiles*

thanks, i'M still working at the first chapter .. i actually finish it the prologue to first chapter, but I revise it a couple of times, so I don't want to put it just yet .. lols [=

awesome i like it well done