Why do I love him?

Chelsea has had a bad life ever since the accident, but......what was the accident?

Chelsea Sims is not you'r average sixteen year old behind closed doors is a different world. What happens when this new hot guy Aaron Samuels comes along? But, theres something weird about him...She needs to find out!

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VeronicaWrites

6/6/2010 12:52 PM PDT

Really want to start reading your book! I know it will be AMAZING!!! Keep working hard at it!!!!

keaira

12/30/2009 7:08 PM PST

Can't wait to start reading.. sounds so gooooood!!!

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KelseyAnn

8/15/2009 7:21 PM PDT

I like this. Great idea. I just kind of wish you'd put quotation marks around your dialogue. Just to make it less confusing.

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sararox521

8/12/2009 5:54 AM PDT

Hey Guys I Havn't been on in a loong time so this project
Is Destane's now sahe asked me if I don't want to do she'd do it It's not that I don't want to do it its that I don't jhave time to write projects and I have alot of mistakes ok well Thanks everyone!hope u understand!

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Matakeshi

6/10/2009 2:29 PM PDT

I think this idea is great.

There's only a few things that should go:

In the first intro of your book, there are no commas or periods. It is a huge run'along sentence. It just makes it less dramatic, I find.

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