Wilde Mountain Time

I'm reposting the novel so that I can submit it for the Agent in Box. Please feel free to read it while it's up.

For anyone reading along and/or commenting on the chapters, please forgive me but I ended up removing everything. It was just easier. I'm going to repost the chapters as I finish them, so hopefully, you'll read along and comment again. This should tighten things up and make the story a lot better.

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate this a lot!

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aussierick36

2/16/2010 10:33 PM PST

Hi ~ I have just started reading your novel - at a quick initial glance it appears to have some merit ...but just a quick note here in the meantime - in your prologue I noticed you have an important spelling mistake: you have WHO'S instead of WHOSE!
Just a small thing - but the sort of thing publishers pick up on!
Good luck and keep it going

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firesgrill

2/14/2010 1:01 PM PST

this was very impressive

AmyCornett

1/27/2010 7:28 PM PST

So far I think the plot is pretty good. I like the characters and I've only read the first four chapters. I'll post another feed back when I finish reading. Amy Straub