Wings

Pain. Thats what she feels when they come out. But once their out she experiences freedom. The freedom of riding the winds.

Sway and her family move to Alaska for a new beginning, for a fresh start. But once there strange things happen to her. Migraines plague her, her appetite is monstrous, and her survival instincts take on a life of their own. And one day the impossible happens: she grows wings. No, she's not an angel, at least not in any biblical sense of the word. She is one of the three species of human that exist on the planet, the one dubbed angels. Their ancestors crop up in old texts, like the bible, but he ... more »

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Square_3nix

4/26/2012 5:33 PM PDT

first off let me say this its great a good plot formed and a storyline worth hanging onto but on the other hand it needs to be more descriptive i understand shes and angel or if shes just being called one but put more imagery into it when people read they want to put themselves in the book as they read along they want to watch the characters mature and they cant do it if they have no imagery of whats going on they want to put themselves in the book and they can only do that if you put an descriptive picture in their heads but overall id love to read this book any time keep it up. im looking forward to this book being published . so i hope this feed back has been an eye opener for you i hope you take it well because it was meant to help so i thank you for your time and you can also give feedback on my projects as well just go to my page and click on my projects and leave some comments if you'd like good or bad ill take it as constructive criticism

LizbethRose

4/15/2012 11:57 AM PDT

Blurb overview:
*they're, not their. HUGE pet peeve.

The tagline is really vague and doesn't really get us anywhere. Turn it into a question, or a quote from a character, etc. This just seems like an 'eh, it hurts but it's worth it thing'.

The blurb itself is good structurally, though worded a bit awkwardly towards the end there. But it's got the point across- it gives the reader a setting, a forward motion, and a reason to read on (needing to answer the question posed).

Lil_miss

1/29/2012 5:51 AM PST

This is very awesome. It reminds me of books like city of bones halo mercy torment etc etc. Ones that centre around angels and demons and the human interpretation of such 'beings'. I'm very intrested and also a tad jealous wishing i could write something along these lines.... Looking forward to more.

JKLee

1/12/2012 10:11 AM PST

General:
It is very interesting. I have only read the Preface and the first chapter, but I really like it so far. It seems to be a real page turner.

Plot:
The plot really seems to come out and grab you.
I really want to find out what is causing Sway's headaches.

ShadowRaven

10/10/2011 5:51 PM PDT

Well, I am defiantely interested in this one! Much like you, i have a strange interest in sci-fi/fantasy genres. I also have a love of angels, demons, vampires, werewolves as well as other fantasy races including elves, orcs, trolls etc. So far what i'm reading sounds intrigueing. I'd love to read more, and what i've read is defiantely well written as well as flows beautifully. I wish i could read more so i could give you a far better critique/feed back. But so far, from what i have read, 4 out of 5 stars. I'll be sure to post my review link in a reply i think you'll love it as it fall right into your favorite genre.