Words of a Teen

11/5/2008 07:34 AM PT

Hey my name is mark shriver my pen name is jorden i like what you write im 15 and i write poetry do you like poetry just wandering you should find me on webook im on marks poetry bye

RickSpencer

10/16/2008 07:45 AM PT

I think you have the courage of someone beyond your years, and more wisdom in a few words than some people could produce in a life time. Keep writing ! You will develop into a good writer.

Crazybeautiful

9/28/2008 05:28 PM PT

I like how you have put this together. I also have a deep appreciation for the strength I see it took you to look for positive things. Good work.

Bunny_Creme

9/27/2008 01:42 PM PT

I like where you're going with this story--don't forget to edit your work extensively first, though! Contact me if you need me to edit your work, we can work something out.

eloogsul

9/27/2008 10:55 AM PT

Very nice i like the intro

becca_xx

9/26/2008 07:15 PM PT

i like it. well i only read the first chapter but i still like it :)

Bethany79

9/26/2008 06:34 PM PT

good introduction

McCuen

9/14/2008 07:19 AM PT

and meant to also say Vianna sounds like a good and unselfish girl.

AmberMarsh

9/13/2008 10:46 AM PT

I like it. It shows that writers of today aren't afraid to say the word God!

ChloeMuffins

9/5/2008 01:30 PM PT

Great introduction. i really enjoyed your writing! keep up the good work!
Another good christian author is Melody Carlson. If you ever need inspiration or just want to read a good book she is the author of teh True Colors series. Her books are good and i think you would like them too.
Good Luck!

LoisSoll

9/1/2008 11:04 PM PT

Another good story, I think, with good lessons again. The main one being that Jesus is our strength. Good encouragement for teens, which there isn't enough of to be found. I know many Christian teens are looking for such. Carry on.

heart18

9/1/2008 07:16 PM PT

I'm glad that you are writing a Christian book for teens, I don't think that there are enough of them out there. I know a lot of teens who have had to grow up faster because their parents stopped raising them, so they have to start raising themselves. Your introduction sounds good, make sure to develop Vianna's character so she can reach out and personally relate to the reader.

Twilight_Dreams

9/1/2008 03:19 PM PT

hi there, well the concept of your story sounds really warm and interesting. good work! i will sure come back and read some more later...

touchwood

9/1/2008 03:09 PM PT

mmm, it sounds very good, however, try not to presume everyone believes, they don't, it is Vianna that does, the book is about her not the reader.

inlove2008

8/29/2008 02:14 AM PT

wow that was very guud and almost made me cry! check my poems out

irene85

8/25/2008 04:25 PM PT

Really good

McCuen

8/25/2008 04:20 PM PT

BEAUTIFUL INTRODUCTION!

RushelleLyn

8/23/2008 03:57 PM PT

I know things like this happen in the world. The only thing you have is faith that God is by you through thick or thin. I have been through situations like something like this. Parents did not care and I had to go through taking care of my brother.

I am as well busy right as of now, but I will eep this at mind and read it when I have the time. I wish best of luck for writing more. It is kind of a hard subject to keep going on, but I wish you luck.

Mahalo - RushelleLyn

x_innocence_x

8/23/2008 05:23 AM PT

sounds interesting. I'm currently writing a novel about a 16 year old girl who converts from being a spoiled, self-centered teen to being a loving young woman who makes God the center of her life. This change in character is caused by the many life-changing events throughout the story, and by the friendship of a girl named Collette....

I'm going to start reading your book when I have the chance. right now I'm busy, but when I have some free time I'll be sure to read it. If you don't mind, could you stop by and take a look at mine too? I would really appreciate it. thanks!

GloriasPoems

8/20/2008 05:25 AM PT

I love the theme. Do you have more on Vianna? I always thought I would get around to telling my full story, but somehow I can't seem to get the words to come.

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