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Writers Block with Paula #2: Killer title, no first sentence

We have the title: "The Wonderful Lies You Told me." But that's all we have...

THIS PROJECT IS NOW CLOSED, WINNERS WILL BE ANNOUNCED ON THE BLOG ON 6/1/2010. PAULA'S NEXT BLOCK COMING SOON!

Paula is in trouble. She's got a great title brewing in her head, but she just can't seem to come up with a winning first sentence. Get the full details here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4D3dDNk7qwc

If you don't have a webcam handy, you can add your solution to Paula's writing woes as a chapter to this project to help her get the ball rolling.

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angelb35

6/4/2010 11:06 PM PDT

still waiting for the blog post of the winners? anyone got a link, maybe i missed it someplace?

FredaRoberts

5/25/2010 8:21 PM PDT

There is sometimes splendor in a lie. I wanted to believe everything he said. silver tongue words that rolled from his lips. The promise of our future that beckoned me into his arms. The sweet whispers that he would love me forever. The hope he that gave me strength .I want to accept his truths . He made me feel anything was possible. I was lost in his beautiful deceit. The man had a way about him that made even the Gods heave a sigh. We would climb mountains he said to me.

FredaRoberts

5/25/2010 8:20 PM PDT

There is sometimes splendor in a lie.

TheIronKing1fan

5/25/2010 5:09 PM PDT

Life might be a big mistake, maybe not, there's no way of telling until it all goes wrong...

MissD1974

5/24/2010 5:52 PM PDT

At the start I wanted so badly to believe everything you told me, that I ignored the warning bells going off in my head. It was easier to believe that you held all the answers. How foolish I was..

lilac

5/24/2010 1:26 PM PDT

my whole life was a lie.

copperbrown

5/22/2010 9:11 PM PDT

It will all be over in a minute, those are the words that i chant in my head over,and over again.I couldnt understand why they were taking him away.

SunnyBellenoit

5/21/2010 7:33 AM PDT

The blood was pouring out of her neck like Niagara Falls, and as I felt her body slither in my arms for the very last time I couldn't help but find a bit of a twist in the situation; I may have been the the liar, but she was holding the knife.

Hoodfamous

5/19/2010 4:50 PM PDT

I often think back to the time when all the lies began. the sweet nothings he would whisper in my ear ,when we made passionate suductive love

SPWhelan

5/18/2010 8:21 PM PDT

This day will be one i never forget . I'm not thief nor a murder. but the wonderful lies you've been telling me, may force me to steal your life.

Deliah

5/16/2010 6:52 PM PDT

Your lies punctured my soul like an ax to a door in a cheap horror film.

xPassionx4

5/16/2010 4:36 PM PDT

Some call it a nasty thing, a lie. Others call it their companion, their partner.

b_e714

5/16/2010 3:44 AM PDT

Bright eyes, so full of promise and sincerity. I met the man/woman of my dreams today and he/she captured my soul in his mind. His confidence devoured mine, he knew he had reeled me in. Some may call it love at first sight, but now i know better.

Anne_Sanders

5/11/2010 7:57 AM PDT

<p>I decided to give you my phone number after your comment that you had enjoyed Cairo more than Paris but regretted not taking the Siberian Railroad home when you were working as an English teacher in China.<br mce_bogus="1"></p>