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a trilogy of poems my life's experiences in 3 poems
Ever meet someone that isn't afraid to express what they're thinking and you're like OMG I was thinking it and they said it. Well thats me in a sentence. I feel like we go through life down trodden enough that we can't even be liberated in our speech for fear of what someone may say or think even though we live in a country where one of the ammendments to the constitution is the right to exercise the freedom of speech.
So on a whirlwind and away we go!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So on a whirlwind and away we go!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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8/27/2009 2:15 AM PDT
Excellent quality. Voted.
And if you have time...
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
And if you have time...
http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest
8/26/2009 9:23 PM PDT
"woke up and for breakfast I tried to eat life"
"never judge unless you can walk in their shoes"
Love is within us where given or shown
be proud of your words, they're important you have something to say
I loved these lines, and I like how you have a lot of emotion and wisdom packed into your poems.you have my vote. Goodluck
"never judge unless you can walk in their shoes"
Love is within us where given or shown
be proud of your words, they're important you have something to say
I loved these lines, and I like how you have a lot of emotion and wisdom packed into your poems.you have my vote. Goodluck
8/23/2009 11:44 PM PDT
8/17/2009 1:58 PM PDT
I am not sure why you do not use apostrophes. I hear the beginning of several powerful messages but suggest you be more focused.
8/16/2009 2:14 PM PDT
Good words, good advice. But uh, 'think long, think wrong,' that's an old poker ploy to get slow-ass players to bet, however, I guess it works here as well. Good luck.
8/11/2009 12:36 PM PDT
these are very good, a different style to my own but i enjoyed the read, well done, good luck
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
http://www.webook.com/project/My-Poetic-Thoughts-and-Rambles
8/10/2009 7:51 PM PDT
got my vote.. good pieces.
8/9/2009 2:07 AM PDT
I like the message in "Cheat Life" - a yes vote.
8/8/2009 5:48 PM PDT
Got my vote. Thx for urs.
8/7/2009 5:16 AM PDT
Great! I voted Publish for you!
I would love to read more of your pieces!
I would love to read more of your pieces!
8/6/2009 6:07 AM PDT
General:
The last was the one I most enjoyed as the theme of expression was something of which I was always most fond.You have my vote.
Form:
Your form is interesting in the way that you make the terms that should be important stand out particularly in the last one.
Content:
Each piece gives the reader and interesting take on the topic that you've chosen but I think you may have some missing words that keep the pieces from flowing as well as they can.
The last was the one I most enjoyed as the theme of expression was something of which I was always most fond.You have my vote.
Form:
Your form is interesting in the way that you make the terms that should be important stand out particularly in the last one.
Content:
Each piece gives the reader and interesting take on the topic that you've chosen but I think you may have some missing words that keep the pieces from flowing as well as they can.
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8/5/2009 9:13 AM PDT
you have my vote.
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8/5/2009 7:03 AM PDT
publish. def.
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8/5/2009 2:24 AM PDT
Well, the beauty and the beast of communication. I like this unusual subject. I can see your expressive presentation with your typography. Good work. Vote to publish.!
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8/5/2009 2:21 AM PDT
First, it was cheating, now it is love.Thanks for this lovely poem. My vote of course.
8/5/2009 2:19 AM PDT
Yes, it is just not easy to get away with cheating. I'll be honest, i vote for you.!
8/3/2009 1:59 PM PDT
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