General:
hope you love the second chapter the fun is just about to sart


Plot:
it's about to get rock and roll risky

Character Development:
corey jayce zebrastripe spencer and the gang

Tone/Voice:
jayce is telling the story

General:
I hope you will like this book as I was bored one day and the idea popped into my head

Plot:
It starts in the early 1950's. Jayce and her family have just moved to town from the city, she doesn't know anything, but city life. Now that she finds crazy friends. The outcome is car racing fun

Character Development:
Jayce is a 17 yearold girl she used to wear nice floral dresses then when she meets her friends. She preferes tight fitting slacks and skirts with her hair down.

Corey is Jayce's crippled little brother, he always has his hair greased and he wears leather shoes and jackets, he's a demon inside but when the parents are looking he is such an angel.

Ricky is Jayce's first friend that she meets in town, he's a big town greaser and knows how to have a lot of fun.

Selma becomes Jayce's best friend and shows all the stuff about being a bad girl.


the cling clang crew is ricky's and selma's greaser group that jayce and her brother soon become a part of


Mr. whitfield is jayce's father who is loose with his kids

Mrs. whitfield is very strict and demands JAyce to watch over her brother corey all the time.

Structure:
it's from start to finish with a fun exciting twist to the climax a wonder twist of mistakes occur left and right.

Tone/Voice:
Jayce tells the story all the way through it is mostly told in third person.