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In the land of Kisitran two cities are at war. Two separate races with no tangible reason for such hostility. An evil spirit known as Judith roams the land and has taken on the form of a hawk. Through dreams she is poisoning the mind of the so called enemy king Rumor. At first he was only aware of an acute anger now that anger begins to take form and is directed at the elven nation. Elijah Hale is the last human with the ancient magic still flowing through his blood. He is the only one who can
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The overview is intriguing, I will now move onto the prologue.
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This is not my genre, but I believe in reviewing people who have taken the time to look at least one chapter of my own book: Prickly Scots.
Having gone through some of your chapters, I feel that you have a natural skill for this kind of work. It is almost dreamlike, and as I said about chapter four, poetic. You have an excellent way with words, and putting the reader in the unlikely fantasy environment which makes them believe that this is a real world.
As was once said to myself, it is the mark of a great writer to be able to transport the reader to the place that is being created; for them to forget everything else around them. I think your potential in this genre is huge.
Very well done.
Having gone through some of your chapters, I feel that you have a natural skill for this kind of work. It is almost dreamlike, and as I said about chapter four, poetic. You have an excellent way with words, and putting the reader in the unlikely fantasy environment which makes them believe that this is a real world.
As was once said to myself, it is the mark of a great writer to be able to transport the reader to the place that is being created; for them to forget everything else around them. I think your potential in this genre is huge.
Very well done.
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:D We're all in this together, I'll gladly read this!
:) Aniytlia
:) Aniytlia
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This seems really interesting, I can't wait till its finished!~
In the summary/overview theres something you need to look out for, sentences need to start with capital letters... none of yours do.
In the summary/overview theres something you need to look out for, sentences need to start with capital letters... none of yours do.
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