"When you ain't got Nothin" spoke to me the most.  It seems such a simple, truthful poem.  I'd do think that there are still some people who seemingly have nothing, and yet have empathy- instinctive feeling of right and wrong.  Others who seemingly have everything lack a basic instinctive empathy...

Enjoyed the work. Publish!

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I love the thoughtfulness and intelligence shown in your collection. I don't feel like any of this was forced, but cleverly crafted.

I especially like the line about equality only being found in a cemetery.

Good luck!

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Excellent quality. Voted.

And if you have time...

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Keep up the good work!
J. Louise
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Society Bargain is worded well, although some the images you create are pretty scary, nice job with it.

Beginning Middle and End almost brought tears too my eyes, it was so beautifully written, and the story was very intriguing.

When you ain't got nothin is somewhat sad, but its all very true. People need others, resources, and love at minimum to live.

Nice job and good luck in the vote.

great poetry!  keep up the great writing!
I hope your pieces get published!!!!!!!!!!!!

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a vote from me..love the meaning of your poems

i love the messages from these..

these are very good, i wish you well in the vote



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i enjoyed your poetry!  nice work!  i hope it gets published!!!

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you have a lot of skill and a deep mind, my friend.

i love the content more than anything. but the form is great also. and the tone is compelling.

great work.


i vote publish.

Good Luck.

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

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I really liked poems 2 and 3  .. no one has a lot of potential too, I did like the consistency in the sound alike words in each line, but I thought perhaps there was just a tiny of bit of inconsistency with those ... almost as if you ran out of them, and went back to two line rhymes.  I also think that if the stanzas in this one were rearranged, that it would flow better.

I loved the poem about despair; having nothing; losing nothing; getting nothing.  Well done ... and um ... I'm sure you'll get more than you want say in the forum re; votes!  Hah!  regardless ... you do good stuff ...meanginful; a lot of other work I have read, doesn't compare ...keep going and good luck.