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The WEbook community
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Project Leader Only
Project Leader Only
Format:
Poetry
Poetry
Type:
Fiction
Fiction
Genre:
Human Interest
Human Interest
Language:
English
English
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11/13/2008 01:22 PM PT
its okay.
11/13/2008 06:34 AM PT
You have my vote. Check out Life And The Spirit From my Perspective.
11/12/2008 12:39 PM PT
You are a very good poet, you are very good at expressing your emotions through words, you paint pictures.
11/12/2008 10:16 AM PT
good luck
11/12/2008 07:11 AM PT
Interesting, good luck
11/12/2008 05:47 AM PT
Good luck!
11/11/2008 10:46 PM PT
Good luck,the hurting world needs healing.
11/10/2008 02:53 PM PT
Good luck!
11/7/2008 11:13 AM PT
awesome write. thumbs up.
11/7/2008 03:07 AM PT
thanx to all...!!! i really appreciate it
but im really not ready to be published
for another like 5 years so i can be the best i can be
but ya i just put them up to see how close am i away from connecting with all of yall thanx again!!!
but im really not ready to be published
for another like 5 years so i can be the best i can be
but ya i just put them up to see how close am i away from connecting with all of yall thanx again!!!
11/6/2008 07:04 AM PT
Wishing you luck!
11/6/2008 01:30 AM PT
Goodluck, my special friend..love always Wennie xxxhugs
11/5/2008 07:53 PM PT
Great Job And Good Luck! You Got My Vote
11/5/2008 10:58 AM PT
Awesome writing please take look at mine and vote for me email me and I’ll give the link
11/4/2008 10:48 PM PT
Good Luck, I voted
10/19/2008 05:58 PM PT
Just a quick edit, you used the wrong form of "there" in your overview. It's supposed to be "their."
10/8/2008 08:39 PM PT
I want to be your voice when you can't speak,
I want to be your strength when you're weak,
I want to be there to hold your hand,
I want to help you up when you can't stand,
I want to be the one to save you,
I want to be the one to say, "I still love you,"
I want to see you each and every day,
I want to be with you, no matter what they say,
I want to be the one you need the most,
I want to be there for you, but you will only see my ghost. . . .
I want to be your strength when you're weak,
I want to be there to hold your hand,
I want to help you up when you can't stand,
I want to be the one to save you,
I want to be the one to say, "I still love you,"
I want to see you each and every day,
I want to be with you, no matter what they say,
I want to be the one you need the most,
I want to be there for you, but you will only see my ghost. . . .
9/17/2008 02:25 PM PT
Every time I look at you,
I'm hit with what I did.
God knows if I could take it back I would.
I love you, more than I have any right to.
How can you love me, after what I did?
And yet you still do.
The only way I can go on, is to pretend,
Forget that evil streak had ever spoken,
If only it were true.
I'm Sorry.
I'm hit with what I did.
God knows if I could take it back I would.
I love you, more than I have any right to.
How can you love me, after what I did?
And yet you still do.
The only way I can go on, is to pretend,
Forget that evil streak had ever spoken,
If only it were true.
I'm Sorry.
9/14/2008 03:43 PM PT
The darkest time is before God and humanity. The light of the human day is God and humanity. we are the voices of god a world of human hope mike
9/6/2008 10:09 AM PT
IT HAS TO GET EASIER
It has to get easier, I've come so far
Never the kind to abandon my kids to go hang at the bar
It has to get easier, It's just so unfair
I'm a good person, so why the despair?
It has to get easier, I have to believe
One day GOD will take me and grant me reprieve
It has to get easier, I've come so far
Never the kind to abandon my kids to go hang at the bar
It has to get easier, It's just so unfair
I'm a good person, so why the despair?
It has to get easier, I have to believe
One day GOD will take me and grant me reprieve
9/5/2008 02:54 PM PT
Losing sight, losing my mind,
Lips pressed to the bottle,
Wishing I could rewind,
I said I was sorry,
You said get out,
I said don’t worry,
You said your better off without,
I’ve been trying,
But every time I try,
Feels like I’m dying,
I need this like I need air,
Why stop now,
My life is way beyond repair,
I feel as if I lost it all,
With no one there,
To break my fall,
Why can’t you see,
You can’t change me
Lips pressed to the bottle,
Wishing I could rewind,
I said I was sorry,
You said get out,
I said don’t worry,
You said your better off without,
I’ve been trying,
But every time I try,
Feels like I’m dying,
I need this like I need air,
Why stop now,
My life is way beyond repair,
I feel as if I lost it all,
With no one there,
To break my fall,
Why can’t you see,
You can’t change me
9/5/2008 02:54 PM PT
I can’t sleep, thoughts of you in my head,
Want to take back all the things I said,
I know I need you,
Wish I’d have known it then,
I can’t help but think,
Of what we could have been,
I’ve got your pictures posted,
I should’ve taken off,
But my hearts been grounded,
Will you take these pieces of me,
Put them back where they used to be,
I’ll try and forgive,
If you just learn to forget,
I don’t want to relive,
What I already forgot,
To make a long story short
I will never be
What you wanted,
But I’ll always be
What you needed…
Want to take back all the things I said,
I know I need you,
Wish I’d have known it then,
I can’t help but think,
Of what we could have been,
I’ve got your pictures posted,
I should’ve taken off,
But my hearts been grounded,
Will you take these pieces of me,
Put them back where they used to be,
I’ll try and forgive,
If you just learn to forget,
I don’t want to relive,
What I already forgot,
To make a long story short
I will never be
What you wanted,
But I’ll always be
What you needed…
9/4/2008 07:42 AM PT
I want to be your voice when you can't speak,
I want to be your strength when you're weak,
I want to be there to hold your hand,
I want to help you up when you can't stand,
I want to be the one to save you,
I want to be the one to say, "I still love you,"
I want to see you each and every day,
I want to be with you, no matter what they say,
I want to be the one you need the most,
I want to be there for you, but you will only see my ghost. . . .
I want to be your strength when you're weak,
I want to be there to hold your hand,
I want to help you up when you can't stand,
I want to be the one to save you,
I want to be the one to say, "I still love you,"
I want to see you each and every day,
I want to be with you, no matter what they say,
I want to be the one you need the most,
I want to be there for you, but you will only see my ghost. . . .
9/3/2008 02:20 PM PT
I’d like to live in a world where fear is just a distant thought.
Where the impossible could be made possible.
Where a first love is a never ending type of love.
A world where everyone is the same yet unique.
World where wars would be myths
And hate would just be for the evil ones.
Where the kinder of our kind could be rewarded for their deeds.
Where peace dominated each and every one of our hearts.
Yeah it is a nice dream. Just wish it could someday we real.
Where the impossible could be made possible.
Where a first love is a never ending type of love.
A world where everyone is the same yet unique.
World where wars would be myths
And hate would just be for the evil ones.
Where the kinder of our kind could be rewarded for their deeds.
Where peace dominated each and every one of our hearts.
Yeah it is a nice dream. Just wish it could someday we real.
7/31/2008 10:03 PM PT
Before the dawn is the most beautiful sight to me.
7/29/2008 12:11 PM PT
the darkest time is before the dawn
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