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i liked them, but a bit more polishing and revising would help a bit. the rhyming was forced in some parts. If this vote doesn't end in good results, I hope the next does. Good luck.
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I sort of like "leaf." The only thing that ruined it for me was the personification, as if the leaf could have wisdom or memories. If you want it to be a metaphor for a person, it needs more work...including opening up the structure and adding more words and ideas.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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I am very pleased to have come across this selection, I have enjoyed them immensely. They are cleverly conceived, beautifully constructed, and flow majestically.
I will certainly be looking at more of your work in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
I will certainly be looking at more of your work in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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Express is hands down my favorite. I
can almost hear you singing as I read the lyrics along with you.
Write on!
can almost hear you singing as I read the lyrics along with you.
Write on!
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amazing poems! i hope you can get your work published!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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All very well done...I love your imagery, your depth of feeling.
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