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8/30/2009 4:55 PM PDT
i liked them, but a bit more polishing and revising would help a bit. the rhyming was forced in some parts. If this vote doesn't end in good results, I hope the next does. Good luck.
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8/30/2009 12:30 AM PDT
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8/28/2009 4:58 PM PDT
I sort of like "leaf." The only thing that ruined it for me was the personification, as if the leaf could have wisdom or memories. If you want it to be a metaphor for a person, it needs more work...including opening up the structure and adding more words and ideas.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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8/27/2009 11:08 AM PDT
I am very pleased to have come across this selection, I have enjoyed them immensely. They are cleverly conceived, beautifully constructed, and flow majestically.
I will certainly be looking at more of your work in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
I will certainly be looking at more of your work in the future. The very best of luck with the vote.
http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries
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8/25/2009 10:42 AM PDT
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8/20/2009 3:11 PM PDT
Express is hands down my favorite. I
can almost hear you singing as I read the lyrics along with you.
Write on!
can almost hear you singing as I read the lyrics along with you.
Write on!
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8/17/2009 4:20 PM PDT
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8/8/2009 12:52 PM PDT
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8/5/2009 12:59 PM PDT
amazing poems! i hope you can get your work published!
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
http://www.webook.com/project/Three-Poems-From-My-Freshman-Year-In-High-School
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8/5/2009 10:29 AM PDT
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8/4/2009 12:29 AM PDT
Great poem.
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8/3/2009 11:17 AM PDT
All very well done...I love your imagery, your depth of feeling.
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8/3/2009 10:10 AM PDT
you have my vote.
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8/2/2009 7:48 PM PDT
I give it a yes
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8/2/2009 7:27 PM PDT
Thank you so much guys. It means a lot...
xxx
xxx
8/2/2009 5:58 PM PDT
awesome awesome work! nice job! you've got my vote!
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8/2/2009 5:59 AM PDT
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8/1/2009 7:54 PM PDT
Good work. You have my vote.
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