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poetry for voting
I have written a number of poems most of poetry I use with novels and some are feelings that over whelm the senses.
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8/31/2009 5:45 AM PDT
GoodLuck Shep...as always your work rocks!!! love it...well done love Wennie xxxhugs
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8/27/2009 4:41 PM PDT
"Shadow Mask" is my favorite. I enjoyed its complexity and tone. I do think, however, some of your punctuation is out of place or missing altogether.
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
Good luck!
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Romantic-the-Sucidial-and-the-Tortured-Soul
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8/26/2009 2:17 PM PDT
Sorry, wrong link. I meant : http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-best-Poems
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8/25/2009 7:27 PM PDT
I absolutely love the old English vocabulary in A rose, and I really like how Shadow Light and Morning Twilight were filled with wisdom. I also found the flow in each of your pems to be quite smooth. You have my vote Great job.
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8/25/2009 3:46 PM PDT
Your write truly poetrically. Is that a word? It should be. Well, I hope you know what I mean. Your prose is fantastic.
http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best-Treats
I cast my vote. Good luck. Please check out mine. Thanks.
http://www.webook.com/project/3-Best-Treats
I cast my vote. Good luck. Please check out mine. Thanks.
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8/22/2009 6:18 PM PDT
this is great work. Your prose is fabulous.
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8/22/2009 6:26 AM PDT
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8/21/2009 11:51 AM PDT
I voted "Publish!"
Great job!
~Kate
Great job!
~Kate
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8/20/2009 6:42 PM PDT
BEAUTIFUL. I can always count on you Shep to find inspiration. Your poems hold so much beauty.
I specially liked " A Rose."
Thanks for voting for my poems, your poems also deserve to be Published.
Love,
Ana
I specially liked " A Rose."
Thanks for voting for my poems, your poems also deserve to be Published.
Love,
Ana
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8/19/2009 3:23 PM PDT
Beautiful! I hope you are included in the winner's circle!
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8/15/2009 10:46 PM PDT
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8/10/2009 12:54 PM PDT
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8/7/2009 3:32 AM PDT
Yes!!!
(i thought i already came here and read, but that must have been another one of your projects... oh well.
good luck to you )
if you want to read mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
(i thought i already came here and read, but that must have been another one of your projects... oh well.
good luck to you )
if you want to read mine:
http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE
thank you!
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8/6/2009 7:02 AM PDT
A yes vote.
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8/4/2009 7:24 AM PDT
all three poems...i love the content but two i find the form not being in a poetic format takes from the pleasure of its reading; if only you had made the rose and morning twilight in a set of verses how much higher i would ate this; however i vote to publish in the hopes that if chosen they allow a revision later and you will take these two and rework them for visual appeal. best of luck.
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8/2/2009 9:24 PM PDT
Very nice...All the best Shep :)
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8/2/2009 3:16 PM PDT
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8/1/2009 11:06 AM PDT
General:
Well versed
Form:
using old english is fine but would like to it in modern language-but it was good
Content:
rich use of adjectives
Imagery:
i thought of the rose bush as i read
Well versed
Form:
using old english is fine but would like to it in modern language-but it was good
Content:
rich use of adjectives
Imagery:
i thought of the rose bush as i read
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