Great Poems. Well Done.

And if you have time...

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

I really enjoyed reading these!

http://www.webook.com/project/In-Times-Of-Love-There-Were

Good enough to be published. Voted.

And if you have the time, check out mine...

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

Voted. Shah. X

I was led to read your entries.  I thus far have taken many mistakes for granted.  That is, an oversight here and there is understandable.  The mind fills in the blanks.  That is to say, our minds read faster than our eyes can detect misspellings.  Any speed reader will attest to this.  That said.  Each of your poems is thrashed with errors and mistakes that a simple spell check would have detected.  As I told one lady, these writes, and I haven’t looked too deeply into the content, appear to have been written in haste.  Again, I can easily look over a mistake here and there, but an editor would be hard-pressed to work with these entries.   My suggestion is that you slow down, use spell check, keep your stanzas short for facilitation and invest in a dictionary.  And keep an eye out for “its” (belong to the thing in question) and “it’s” (contraction of it is). 
I will not kick a dead horse, but between the three, there are easily over fifty grammar mistakes.

Thes poems are not worth voting for because they are riddled with spelling mistakes.  I don't care how good the content is; poor spelling makes for bad poetry.

I don't know why Mike Murphy and KarenKeen voted for you unless they can't spell either.  I'm sorry but I am not prepared to give you false hope as they have.

the third is my favourite, flows well with the rhyme i feel like im on a train and it's all rushing by
good luck

i like dogs of war, describes it well, you can picturethe savagery of it

a thinking

thinkers ,thinking things ,that he thinks

when thinking.

now that is a good tongue twister! 
very descriptive well done

I  like  my  stuff

Three very good poems - a yes vote.
Best wishes,
Mike.

http://www.webook.com/project/Verse-Macabre