Good Stuff ~!~ G'Luck ...

you are a great writer.

Publish!

Thank you for all your kind comments.  I am not sure that I deserve them but you are all lovely people.

Satyr, you have already won in our hearts, we all know your Poetry is up there with the greats.  Your talent is amazing, it touches the heart with true emotions.  I truly love reading your work, I admire it so much.  You are inspirational to so many Poets.  You enlighten us all... with your great ability to craft words.  At times... I just sit in amazement for hours, reading your Poetry, delving into its deep.  I just enjoy reading what you say and how you put it, with such beautiful imagery to complete the picture.  You are brilliant Satyr as a friend, as a Poet and so much more.  Never give up because the views on your work, tell the real story, God Bless You love Wennie xxxhugs

Fantastic!

http://www.webook.com/project/Top-3-Poems-of-Assorted-Interest

I really love the voice of this piece, as though you are having a discussion with a confidant. The stark subject is well drawn without soppy sentiment. And the last line really shines. This piece is one of your best - glad to c it here.

Like Ellen C - I thought I had already commented and voted on this - it is a pleasure to experience your words again. These writings are of the sort that the reader discovers something more with each reading.

A diffenent Publish from me!

A definite jump up and down yes! from me.

A yes vote from me.

http://www.webook.com/project/Animal-Cruelty

Thought I had already voted here, as well.  I read your work, and feel like I'm sitting at your feet -- I so admire what you do.

Good work, you got a yes vote from me.

I am afraid that this is beyond my ability to review. I have not the skill to poke holes in structure nor tear at the imagery.

I need more years.

You know my thoughts on your works, my friend.

You are a truly astonishing writer and one that I will continue to read, and learn from, for a long time to come.

The very best of luck with the vote.

http://www.webook.com/project/My-3-Emotive-Entries

yes from me, for so many reasons. Great!

I would like the voice of the social conscience be heard in the future poetry publication. I vote YES, publish.

Who are we to know how aboriginal people felt when displaced, separated, maimed and killed by the thousands?

Let us hear the voice of a native, then we can lower our heads in shame and weep (for the past arrogance and ignorance). Thanks to Labour we have said 'Sorry', sorry is not enough. We need action.

The physiological harm caused by the devastation of their habitat and way of life - as with the American Indian, and many other cultures - will last for generations.
This is a time of mourning for them, this we must understand; the sun will shine again with the coming of the 'Green Age' and the appreciation of the value of the land, water, air, and animals - our brothers and sisters.

I weep not only for the Australian natives, but for all true owners of this earth, all of us.

LaGoya

Your an incredible writer. I couldn't decide which of these I enjoyed the most!
Good luck...

x

Wow, I forgot how good this stuff was.  Good thing I came back to take a look.  I remember reviewing the first couple, but the last is probably my favorite yet. =)

Definitely refreshing from the usual Anglocentrist
speak English or die belief system.
Better to make friends than ancestral enemies right?

General:
This were quite interesting. You have a yes my friend.

Imagery:
These were strong...

Tone:
and well heard as read

~A.J

Satyr, please do not withdraw your poems from the vote. It would be a huge loss; it is very hard to find quality poems, here, and if we want this voting process to yield anything beyond what will always be a popularity contest (inevitably), you should probably reconsider. I could honestly say that you have probably the strongest three set of poems out of what I have read thus far. You really have a strong flare and a larger poetic craft than you give yourself credit. Ignore the links that are spamming your feedback column; this practice will always be an inevitable cause when involved in this type of domain.

Don't lose patients and by the way, I voted yes.

Good luck.

Tuesday_rayne, the answer to your question is that I suspect that my submission is a "No" rather than a "Yes".  Partially due to my ineptness as poet, partially due to the subject matter of my work and p;artially due to the fact that this has turned into an unseemly bartering for votes.

I do wish that you hadn't put that link here as it is part of what I akm complaining about.  I know that you mean no harm by it, but I feel self-advertisement should be banned and I am seriously considering withdrawing from this contest.

could the answer be anything but, YES!




if you want to find mine to look:

http://www.webook.com/project/Voodoo-Hearts-My-3-Poems-for-entry-Webook-2009poetryVOTE

You know I love your poems.  Very thoughtful and well constructed, they are interesting on multiple levels.  My favorite of these three is Dreamers, but Maralinga sticks in my mind as well.  I hope you'll be published.

xx Marilyn

Three excellent poems, full of melancholy.  Satyr, these are so different from your writings I've read elsewhere on webook.  They give us an insight into your mind and heart that we wouldn't find in, say, the 50-word challenge forum. ;-)

You definitely have my vote, with your deep thoughts and questions left unanswered.

Never any question that I would cast my vote for your work!!! Good Luck.

Congratulations!!! love Wennie xxxhugs

great work specially for me, surprise surprise, 'Death'

Never any doubt in my mind that these should be a part of the publication !

A yes vote.

Satyr treats his subject matter with dignity
and with a unquestionable style and class.
The vote of confidence stands.

Publish.

Very high standard to try  to reach,that you've set and thus it is a must to publish as a beacon for the rest to set site for.

i have had you in mind for a while as one i wanted to vote for, and i still feel the same reading them today. great work, classic sounding poems; yours would help make it top-notch.

Your writing is beautiful and thought-provoking, Satyr. I vote yes. Best to you always, ~heart.

GOOD luck

these three poems are inspiring, worthy of consideration..

Voted for you