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Romance -
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The Greatest Ride
Summer had flown by, and a carnival celebration was the perfect way to end it. The bright lights, mass of people, and the chiming sounds surrounded me. I could feel the magic in the air, and I knew that this night felt different. There he was standing out from the mass, and everything sorrounding him became a blur. Although summer was coming to a close, a new love was just beginning.
LOVE IS LIKE A CARNIVAL, IT'S A GAME OF CHANCE.
LOVE IS LIKE A CARNIVAL, IT'S A GAME OF CHANCE.
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4/24/2009 9:42 PM PDT
Interesting choice of words and setting. Well, it's just so true in some places; and not many stories are set in carnivals. It is very interesting. I will have a read and give you better encouragement later...
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3/30/2009 3:10 PM PDT
i'll have a read :)
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3/8/2009 4:55 PM PDT
wow i love ur idea!!!!!! u rock!!!!!! =)
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3/2/2009 2:03 AM PST
Please ignore the feedback below! It was posted when I was very new to WEbook. What is written below is from the Prologue chapter :) Let me know if you know how to delete feedback so i can get rid of it.
Enjoy!
Enjoy!
3/2/2009 1:40 AM PST
“I’m taking you somewhere,” he told me as he took my hand. “Close your eyes.” As the loud, uplifting music filled my soul the car kept a steady pace. I closed my eyes.
“Where are you taking me?” I giggled as I was filled with curiosity & excitement.
“It’s a surprise baby. You’ll see.”
“Did you plan this?”
“No, but I’ve been wanting to take you here.” My mind was filled with wonder for where the night could lead us next.
Meet Chase; The boy of my dreams, the love of my life, and currently the driver to the secret location. I never thought I’d be next to him in this passenger seat, but I am so glad fate brought us together.
“Are we almost there?” I was getting anxious! I actually kept my eyes closed for atleast 5 minutes, which is harder than you may think.
“Yeah were here.” Phew, Finally.
I heard a roar as the engine turned off, and next thing I know he’s picking me up out of the vehicle to take me somewhere else.
“I’ll tell you when to open your eyes.” He was walking me somewhere, holding my hand and fully guiding me. I was walking way too carefully and because I was wearing my Steve Madden grey leather booties there was a click-clack sound on the pavement.
“I’m gonna run into something!” I was laughing so hard, like a giddy little school girl.
“I got you, don’t worry. Just keep going.” He continued to walk me to this mysterious spot of our already mysterious location. As I stopped, Chase told me to go a little further, just a few feet back till I could finally open my eyes.
“You can open your eyes now.”
“Where are you taking me?” I giggled as I was filled with curiosity & excitement.
“It’s a surprise baby. You’ll see.”
“Did you plan this?”
“No, but I’ve been wanting to take you here.” My mind was filled with wonder for where the night could lead us next.
Meet Chase; The boy of my dreams, the love of my life, and currently the driver to the secret location. I never thought I’d be next to him in this passenger seat, but I am so glad fate brought us together.
“Are we almost there?” I was getting anxious! I actually kept my eyes closed for atleast 5 minutes, which is harder than you may think.
“Yeah were here.” Phew, Finally.
I heard a roar as the engine turned off, and next thing I know he’s picking me up out of the vehicle to take me somewhere else.
“I’ll tell you when to open your eyes.” He was walking me somewhere, holding my hand and fully guiding me. I was walking way too carefully and because I was wearing my Steve Madden grey leather booties there was a click-clack sound on the pavement.
“I’m gonna run into something!” I was laughing so hard, like a giddy little school girl.
“I got you, don’t worry. Just keep going.” He continued to walk me to this mysterious spot of our already mysterious location. As I stopped, Chase told me to go a little further, just a few feet back till I could finally open my eyes.
“You can open your eyes now.”
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