Under The Summer Willow

Sophie Lancaster spent much of her tennage life in a dorm in upstate New York while her parents lived and worked on a ranch in Wyoming. Chase Ashe comes from a fairly large family and wealthy family, he too went to a private school. When Sophie's parents loose thier job and relocate to Chester, Massachusetts; Sophie finds herself out of highschool and a half a mile down the road from Chase Ashe. When the two find a special place Under A Summer WIlow on he edge of the two family's land, a friendship that will certainly last a life time begins to blossom.

Sophie Lancaster lived on a Ranch; Chase Ashe is the youngest of 3 boys. Sophie was sent to boarding school, Chase was sent to a boys prep school. When Sophie graduated high school she found her self to moving back to her family's 2 bedroom cottage on a ranch in Wyoming but to a large house in small town Chester Massachusetts. When Chase went for a visit to see his new neighbours he found himself face to face with the girl of his dreams. When Sophie saw her new neighbours she just saw another i ... more »

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CrzHrsGal

7/12/2009 11:27 AM PDT

Needs a little work but i like the story line

RLessing

5/9/2009 6:43 PM PDT

Hi,
There are some spelling and grammatical errors. I have been told that this takes away from the message. I agree.
I assume there is a willow tree somewhere but it was not mentioned here.
The third sentence is confusing..."found herself moving back to her family's 2 bedroom cottage on a ranch in Wyoming but to a large house in sall town chester, Mass." Which is it?
Could be an interesting story. Good 'boy meets girl' premise.
Good Luck,
Rich

WordShaker

4/27/2009 3:16 PM PDT

This is interesting. However, you should revise your overview as there are a couple of typos in the last sentence in bold.
Also:
loose - lose
thier - their

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