Cristo's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 37

Last Review: 6/18/2017

The June Challenge: One Day

Experimental

A lot can happen in a day and a night...

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  • Not all There
    The last thing you want is 'feedback' with no value to add to it. So I need to t ...
  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    It's hard to believe this is 1000 words. I had to check. You'd told so much and ...

(for now) heart of stone

Action/Adventure

living in the woods fighting for her life

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If These Walls Could Speak

Teen

Kara's life is spinning out of control. Her older sister commits suicide, her ab ...more »

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Kaytarra and the Knights of Hialea (working title)

Romance

True Love; Infinite Loyalty; Bitter Vengeance; Malicious War - these things, and ...more »

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Little Brother Sanders

Literary

A Humorous Novel about Mental Illness, Shakespeare, and Religion in the Deep Sou ...more »

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  • Cutter
    I'm liking Saul's character more and more.  I also enjoyed reading about the ch ...
  • Acting
      I'm starting to get into it now...enjoying it very much. But theres somethign ...

Once Bitten, Twice Shy

Sci Fi/Fantasy

When Ireland was a little girl, vampires exposed themselves to the human eye. Sh ...more »

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  • Prolouge
    Like the other things I've read from you, it has got great promise, the opportun ...

Devious

Teen

This is not your everyday fairytale book.  What you read in here is real, and th ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 2: Koto
    Now this chapter I really did enjoy! It reminds me of a cross between the nevere ...
  • chapter one
    Better than the average. I'm sceptical of high fantasy nowadays cause I want to ...

The Lost and Fallen

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Sesheta Andilgo knows nothing of her past. When she awakes in the slums of Manha ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Are you still writing this? It's got potential. Let me know when or if you put a ...

H u s h.

Romance

“He who does not understand your silence, will probably not understand your word ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • 10. Chpt 9
    Maybe it's because, for some reason, I think of her as a little girl. Not physi ...
  • 10. Chpt 9
    Its not a romantic chapter for me. Kinda makes me feel sick. I don't know why... ...