Dollys's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 1750

Last Review: 9/11/2016

The September Challenge: Sights & Sounds

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  • Ruined
    5 Star  I thought the language and word choice were excellent.  The challenge to ...
  • Meeting Dylan Thomas
    5 Star  Oh this hit out - on several levels!  So insightful - so real - so tende ...
  • You Just Never Know What's in Another's Heart
    5 Stars  This was excellent story-telling.  Fast paced and gritty. The Reader wa ...
  • THE CRIME SCENE
    4 stars  extending off in oppopsite - opposite?  For this reader, there were a l ...
  • Down Texas Way
    5 Star  A western. A cowboy read. I enjoyed this - it drew the reader  in and th ...
  • Mom's Loan To Lenny
    5 star  I liked this. The mood was upbeat and the tale changed pace..so the read ...
  • Slippery Soap
    4 Stars  Mr. Shapiro? “I mean, - remove speech mark? all blind.” the - comma, no ...
  • Caverns of the Night
    5 Stars  Apocalyptic tale sprinkled with satire - great!   go find the tribe”. ...
  • Depths
    3 Star  A cave, a wet blob monster and panic. All the makings of a Disney cartoo ...
  • Darkness
    3 Star   "Don't hurt me! I-I just want to go home." the girl cried with fear. "I ...
  • The Vulture
    3 Star  A opossums carcass - An opossum's?  I didn't understand the story. At fi ...
  • Necronomicon
    5 Stars  Futuristic - Scene setting vivid - Dialogue that gets the Reader emotio ...
  • Movie Star
    5 Stars  The tone/voice and emotional feel of the chapter and of the characters ...
  • Memories
    5 Stars  Oh I liked this. Paranormal - Goody!  I thought it was from an animal's ...
  • Snow-blind
    5 Stars  This drew me in. The reader wanted to see where it would lead.  Comment ...