Eluzar's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 37

Last Review: 10/8/2009

Etan Thomas Presents: Voices of the Future

Memoir/Narrative Non-fiction

Write alongside NBA player/poet Etan Thomas. For anyone age 13-25 who can imagin ...more »

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Dream Anthology

Short Story

Record your interesting dreams in the form of stories.

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Learned Limericks

General

Get your point across in 5 lines--write a limerick about any topic!

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  • Grammar Made Simple
    Perhaps you should say "for example:" instead of "like...". It contributes to th ...

Every Last Drop

Short Story

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  • {No Title}
    This is actually a really good story. It illustrates the feeling of not wanting ...

Broken Silence

Short Story

This a collection of Short Stories & Poems that I have written for myself (& som ...more »

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  • Desperate Times
    This is a great story. I agree with LuckyDuckling, the mystery is wonderful. Her ...

Miss Elayne Ous' Musings

Short Story

A multifarious assemblage of short fiction.

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  • Death of Innocence
    The content is wonderful. It's a very interesting story, and I like it a lot. If ...
  • The Third Fire
    I like this piece a lot. It is unique and unlike almost any other short story I ...

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Teen

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  • 2.
    Great job! This story is very deep and very thought provoking. Everybody is sayi ...

Bufoxx Plays

Short Story

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It AIN'T Fan Fiction!

Short Story

An open Project for people who want to carry their favorite characters a few ste ...more »

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Snippets

Short Story

Random stuff and a few inserts from stories I'm working on

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  • Midnight melody
    I really enjoy reading your paragraphs. They may not be the very best writing on ...

Just write

Short Story

Short stories, poems, thought, letters, articles, etc. Just write something, wha ...more »

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