Josafat's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 847

Last Review: 11/26/2017

The November Challenge: Disappear

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What if it wasn't there any more? Then what would happen?

Submission Reviews

  • Got No Heat at Home
    Nice to see a different form of writing here, especially a song!  Well done. :)
  • The Blessings Bureau
    Twisted! How does he even keep his job? Ah, wait, is it considered a government ...
  • Incomplete
    Wow! This is definitely your must-submit submission for this month.  I loved how ...
  • The Scarf
    I like the idea of the missing scarf as a symbol of what these two lovers have a ...
  • Last Interview
    Clever! Had me hooked all the way through the end to solve the mystery of what h ...
  • Foster
    I like the opening part, with the dialogue, the rebellious attitude and setting ...
  • " ..Let us assay our plot" - Helena
    Well written and definitely missing plot and point of view, which qualifies it f ...
  • System Lost
    These are very appealing beings in a universe that sounds like our own but looke ...
  • Royally F— (2)
    AlecS: my fear exactly. So hope that there isn't some obscure form adjective lur ...
  • A Little ...
    Oh my God! The character is verbose to the very last word! But in a good way.  I ...
  • Belle
    Fantastically wicked! I was entertained all the way through this story, love the ...
  • The One-Eyed King
    Wonderful! I like the theme of survival of the "unfittest," at least from the po ...

The October Challenge: The A-Z of Fear

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Welcome, welcome, welcome...

Submission Reviews

  • Where Monsters Dwell
    Thank you AlecS.  And I can see your point on the coiled spring image....must un ...
  • The Silent Starship
    Great story! It made me think Startrek Voyager in a very good way.  The setting ...
  • Athazagoraphobia
    Great writing, great story, unique in the dialogue that takes place between his ...