Lexigirl18's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 9

Last Review: 9/19/2016

The Azure Flame

Action/Adventure

A magical task force with the job of protecting non-mages discovers a more sinis ...more »

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Finding Aurora

Action/Adventure

I don't know why they would leave me, but they did. - Aurora

Project Reviews

  • Just some common spelling errors  "Has a horrific passed" should be has a horrif ...

Submission Reviews

  • Jayce
    Spelling help:  Hunger should be hungry second paragraph  Walked out to the libr ...

Haven: Outbreak

Horror

His parents died, We are all he has left.

Submission Reviews

  • {No Title}
    General: I like it, but I think this chapter should be made in to two chapters f ...

HalfBlood

Action/Adventure

After a series of experiments done on Kazume while she was in shira, She returne ...more »

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Battle Monk

Action/Adventure

“20 seconds.” He sais before looking up. The guards stop, even from the distance ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 1
    One thing I would advise putting in the beginning or some where in your reading ...
  • Intro
    General: Details , detail, details is all I got for you.  Other than that you ha ...

The October Grimm Challenge

Fairytales, Folklore & Mythology

“In olden times, when wishing still helped...” there were ways for people, and n ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Agent Hood.
    Very good! Like the sick plot changing to little red riding hood. Like this vers ...

Newsletter Zombie and Monster Writing Challenge

Horror

The greatest horrors lie in the darkness of our minds...

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  • City Hunter
    General: Was very thrilling, didn't want it to end.  Plot: It would sound better ...