Scarlet_Girl's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 118

Last Review: 5/2/2014

The May Challenge

General

This month we're challenging you to write a story based on an image...

Submission Reviews

  • Behind the door.
    Thank you all for the advise. I have tried to expand and revise as best as I can ...

Nobyls

Sci Fi/Fantasy

When the world went to shit, we did what we could to survive. When that didn't w ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Fun fact, the its in "...and its aftermath," is a possessive use of the word, no ...

Submission Reviews

Imagine There's No Heaven

Thriller/Suspense

Ireland, 1997.  A schoolbus explodes.  The only survivor is Jack, the bus driver ...more »

Project Reviews

  • All in all, this is a pretty good start. Having only read your overview up to th ...

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter One
    General: I have been moved by your words. They have left me with a range of emot ...

Project Hellion

Sci Fi/Fantasy

In this post apocalyptic, sci-fi thriller, Hellion Tor - the first born and seco ...more »

Project Reviews

  • First, wow. I mean, I am very excited to read this story based solely on your ov ...

Submission Reviews

  • Prologue
    General: I am marveled by your writing and intrigued by your characters. I love ...

The Name Of This Book Is A Superstition

Children's

Max was twelve years old the day the fate of the world was placed in his hands.

Project Reviews

  • You have really got my attention with your plot. I like what you're doing and ca ...

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter Zero
    I am very impressed with the revisions you have made. I am noticing a lot less r ...

Murdered Dreams

Teen

Now, I'm afraid to dream. I'm afraid to envision something so sweet that I just ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Preface
    Overall, it's an interesting start. The real problem is that up to this point, I ...

There's No Time

Teen

A girl with a unique power comes across a major problem when someone finds out a ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 3
    Overall, I really enjoyed seeing how Mia and Andrew played off each other. I'm s ...