Shiby's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 74

Last Review: 7/25/2011

The Alpha Omega Writing Challenge

General

Create a world. Then destroy it. All in 300 words.

Project Reviews

  • They might announce at the end of the month...argh 5 more days?! We can't WAIT f ...
  • My short story 'Free Us' seems off. Can someone read over and let me know what's ...
  • Not the best of writing...  I actually tried to do 295 words of creating and the ...

Submission Reviews

  • When the Sun Finally Comes ....
    Good writing, I like this idea. :3  There are a few spots where you could use a ...
  • The Covington
    The scene change was a bit unexpected and confused me for a moment, but I like t ...
  • Shattered
    Oh I love this!  But now I don't think I'll ever look at my beta the same way ag ...
  • Forgotten
    Some of these sentences can be rewritten to look a bit better, and using words l ...
  • Fangopia
    He brother was her world? Or was the world created for her brother?  And the exp ...
  • You're My World
    Very descriptive - I can imagine everything clearly! Love it!

Che sara,sara.

Humor/Satire

Veronica Santangelo, a staunch Catholic, joins forces with her Jewish neighbor, ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Oho!!! You've got my attention!  *joins*

The Twitter Story Writing Challenge

General

Write a story consisting of seven tweets.

Submission Reviews

The Girl Dressed in Blue Light

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Can John save his family without losing everything he loves?

Project Reviews

  • Of course I'll join. :D

The Steampunk Writing Challenge

General

Write a short scene (max 500 words) that incorporates one or more key elements o ...more »

Submission Reviews