Sprayoncrayon's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 3168

Last Review: 11/17/2017

The November Challenge: Disappear

Experimental

What if it wasn't there any more? Then what would happen?

Project Reviews

  • You know Astaroth, Asmodeus, Berith and Belial Berith, and Abaddon, and Mammon a ...
  • Also, if your church newsletter has a section for "Dear Screwtape", you might be ...
  • Alec, there's an easy way to check. Is there a Saint Nicholas or a Saint Aleiste ...
  • How does that work?  "Hi everyone, my name is Tony. It's been sixteen months sin ...

Submission Reviews

  • The Tires
    A continuation from last month, although somewhat more coherent, to reflect the ...
  • The Plot Thickens?
    To be honest, I was waiting for some sort of Cloud Atlas-like chiastic structure ...
  • Belle
    Also, in Canada, the air hurts your face.  We have freezing fog.  Black ice.  Te ...
  • Belle
    You could say, "There are many causes of PTSD, but I'm sure the military appreci ...
  • The Plot Thickens?
    Missing: A sense of coherence?  The rest of each story?  You have a lot of tell, ...
  • Incomplete
    Isn't a MacGuffin the thing that everybody's looking for but is never fully desc ...
  • The Blessings Bureau
    I guess it is still a comment on the gun control lobby.  Four hundred years with ...
  • System Lost
    Because I am only familiar with the beginning of the saga and not the whole myth ...
  • The Blessings Bureau
    What's missing, a sense of decency, perhaps?  Compassion for the human condition ...

The November Novel Challenge 2017

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Fancy seeing your novel in print? Now's your chance...

Submission Reviews

  • Danny's Song
    You have changed the order of events so that he or she is mutilating him before ...
  • Steel Heaven - An exerpt
    It's interesting, that's for sure. Not really sure where you're going with this, ...