Sprayoncrayon's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 2974

Last Review: 6/16/2017

The June Challenge: One Day

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A lot can happen in a day and a night...

Project Reviews

  • Eric makes a good point, though.  We aren't here to tell other writers what is w ...
  • Vanity?

Submission Reviews

  • Thinning the Herd
    Also, the mayor was a bit of a caricature, having little personality besides, "f ...
  • Timex
    Neat perspective from a dog, something I have tried myself.  I would have liked ...
  • Not all There
    As Alec pointed out, you've put your readers on to the idea that he was already ...
  • Monday Moon
    I was looking forward to reading your submission after seeing what you had to sa ...
  • I Liked Us Better Then
    Suffice it to say, Tony, that the original sub stuck with me long enough that I ...
  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    Hi Fiona. Even if you hadn't indicated that this was part of a larger work, it h ...
  • Thinning the Herd
    Meh, I feel like the twist has been done before.  The fact that he was the lone ...
  • The Secret Diary of Matthew Hopkins Aged 22 & ¾
    This witch finder general must have an incredibly quick metabolism for the 'shro ...
  • Thinning the Herd
    I'll admit, I didn't read the whole thing. I had to stop as I was struck by a th ...
  • Cosmium
    So Alec, "God was, by virtue of being god," doesn't need a second capitalization ...
  • London
    Sweet.  I'll take points for the assist.
  • Tentacles
    Six toddlers and no support?  Sure, it's a hell of her own making, I suppose, bu ...
  • Peaceful atom
    To add to the comments and suggestions, you may wish to go back and review what ...