Sylvan_Streams's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 16

Last Review: 7/24/2010

Ben Coleman's Interesting Ideas

Inspiration

Throughout my reasonably short life so far, I have considered myself a deep thin ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Is there a way of communicating this that will seem less egotistical? Keep the e ...

Writers Guild Competition VII

General

You guys have heard it all before! Winner gets the glory! But for those of you w ...more »

Project Reviews

  • In first grade my teacher sent for my mother.   "What's this about? Did you diso ...
  • In first grade my teacher sent for my mother.   "What's this about? Did you diso ...

Submission Reviews

Jake and Me

Teen

REWRITTEN VERSION OF MY COMPUTER. THE INTERNET AND JAKE.....totally changed and ...more »

Submission Reviews

The Memory Challenge

General

Write a short scene where an object evokes a strong memory for a character.

Project Reviews

  • What I smelled put my hair on end. I instinctively raced for the nearest shelter ...

The Metaphor or Simile Challenge

Experimental

Write three sentences (max 100 words) and include one metaphor or simile within ...more »

Project Reviews

  • I am a ghost writer. Really.  I died last year at the knees of my dear Eleanor o ...

Submission Reviews

  • Candles
    A VERY CREATIVE METAPHOR., CARRIED THROUGH TO ITS ULTIMATE END.  NICE WRITING. I ...

The Character Creation Challenge

Experimental

Create a short bio for a complex and compelling character.

Project Reviews

  • Am I a Hero?  In his last weeks, as he lay dying, over and over he asked, “Am I ...

One Syllable Writing Challenge

Experimental

Write a brief scene about any topic of your choosing using only single syllable ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • The Signs of a Beast
    I am not going to read another one of these! I tried the one syllable exercise, ...
  • The Song Box
    Is this a front for Pandora's Box?  I love kid literature and love your persiste ...
  • He Stole Me
    Kids who love vampires should love this.  I;m not  a fan myself but I see that i ...
  • Our Sam
    Great children's story.  Now I know why my book didn't get published.  Oh, wait, ...
  • Fly With the Wind
    SO IT CAN be done, and well! I hope there will be more of this. I sense danger. ...
  • Give Us This Day, Our Name In Lights
    This was interesting, but I need a few clues about blogs.  Is there a down side, ...