Theloveless's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 16

Last Review: 11/9/2010

The State of a Nation (Part 1)

Short Story

8 short stories, 8 states of America

Project Reviews

  • When are you putting the stories up? :)

The Character Schedule Challenge

General

Write a character's Thursday schedule (max 200 words)

Submission Reviews

  • Wile E. Coyote
    I liked it! Brought a smile to my face! Also well written!!
  • Working From Home
    I really liked the lines "begging of my mobile" and " snacked on parallel white ...
  • A Drunken Accident
    sunrise_ashes Thanks for your help! I'm going to revise it and cut out a large ...
  • Day 5
    Is this god making the earth? Good idea. :)
  • A Death Row Diary
    I really enjoyed reading this. I like the way you portrayed the time counting do ...

The Non-Dialogue Writing Challenge

General

Describe an interaction between two characters based solely on body language. (m ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Hi I've revised my sbmission called 'Snakes and statues'.   I would love it ...
  • Hi, my submission is called 'snakes and statues'. I'd be happy if someone would ...

Submission Reviews

Blue fire

General

Poems

Project Reviews

  • I like to imagine that this project could be a little book, with my art work bes ...

Build-A-Story 4

Experimental

The story starts with a sentence.  Then, a participant may add another sentence, ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • #41
    Its charles btw no charlie. :)

The Wilting Sunset

Family Life & Saga

"Please Tell Me Daddy, to end my sorrow, will I know you, when it comes tomorrow ...more »

Project Reviews

  • Plot: Good story, makes an interesting read :)

Unstructured Poetry

General

originally, a project of my own work, but now i would like you to write some

Submission Reviews

You Can't Spell Funeral Without Fun

Humor

It's time to look death in the eye and laugh!  Tell us about your ideal way to d ...more »

Project Reviews

  • sounds fun fun fun!!