Unlivingmoon's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 47

Last Review: 4/23/2011

The Steampunk Writing Challenge

General

Write a short scene (max 500 words) that incorporates one or more key elements o ...more »

Project Reviews

  • From what I have seen so far, there are some very inventive and  well- written s ...

Submission Reviews

  • The Arm
    I didn't know that mechanical lesbian sex was cliche but okay....
  • The Arm
    I thought that my story could use a bit more so I did a little revision. Thanks ...
  • My Wicked Heart
    This was a good scene but I feel as if I was just given the middle of a story an ...
  • The Frontier
    Very nice storytelling from the prospector's point of view. The only thing a bit ...
  • Stolen Into Privilege
    I really enjoyed the story and I think that it was well-written but I agree with ...
  • A Change of Hands
    Great scene!- I would love to read more.  My only question is about your use o ...
  • The Tragedy of the Obsidian Rose
    Mychal- I assume that you are from the UK or thereabouts because in the US brace ...
  • The Machines Stop
    This scene feels like an exciting beginning to an even bigger story. I would hap ...
  • Going Down
    I agree with Mychal.Had I not known ahead of time that this was a steampunk stor ...
  • The Glimpse into Tomorrow
    It didn't seem to me that this was a scene- just a nice descriptive backstory. Y ...
  • Steamjet
    I like the idea of the niece creating an invention that apparently goes against ...
  • The Passengers
    I really liked the idea of the alchemists standing together to fend off their pu ...
  • Sex Prostibot's
    If there isn't already robot porn, you're sure to start a trend. Is it wrong how ...
  • The Water Baron
    Great story- I especially love the addition of Ol' Nessy. Doing a spin on our ow ...