VendettaDean's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 17

Last Review: 10/4/2010

The Non-Dialogue Writing Challenge

General

Describe an interaction between two characters based solely on body language. (m ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Longing
    Thank you so much I totally forgot not to put it in first person but I went thro ...
  • Texan River Dance
    Loved this although I must say I didn't understand it until the end and I reread ...

The Travel Scene Challenge

General

Write a short scene (max. 200 words) that includes a character traveling somewhe ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • The First Step
    To me I guess I didn't really decide if it was a physical step or not. What I re ...

The "Cheating" Challenge

General

Write a short scene in which a character "cheats."

Submission Reviews

  • You Cheated
    I loved this. The pace was amazing and fit the story perfectly! Whatever you do, ...
  • Abby Rose
    Okay, before I posted the word count said two hundred on the dot and I counted a ...

The "Dear John" E-Mail Challenge

General

Write a fictional breakup e-mail to either a male or a female.

Submission Reviews

Bellum

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Sophia never wanted to lead the war, the rebellion. She had no choice.

Project Reviews

  • Please, please, please leave a comment! I really love to get feedback positive o ...

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter Four
    Just to clarify, I didn't enjoy writing it because I like it when Sophie is in a ...
  • Chapter Four
    So far this is my favorite chapter! I had alot of fun writing this.

The Manuscript

Sci Fi/Fantasy

A world steeped in darkness. A lost manuscript. A reluctant heroine who must fig ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Prologue
    Loved it! It makes me want to read more! I don't have time now but I will for su ...

Through the Eyes of Avery

Teen

Avery Ryder is the daughter of the two richest people in the city. So why should ...more »

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Write Six Word Novels!

Experimental

Can you write a six word novel? Its possible!

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The Memory Challenge

General

Write a short scene where an object evokes a strong memory for a character.

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The Flash Fiction Challenge

Experimental

Write an entire story in 100-110 words.

Submission Reviews

  • The Foolish Boy
    Thank you for the feedback. It really helped and I think I've fixed the problems ...