WeBookUser's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 373

Last Review: 7/9/2017

The June Challenge: One Day

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A lot can happen in a day and a night...

Submission Reviews

  • Timex
    Haha, great story! That was very entertaining!  I do have a few small nitpicks t ...
  • London
    Great story, Jo!  Very touching and an easy read. Can’t help but feel this is a ...
  • Tentacles
    Haha, got a good chuckle out of Hailey’s biting. Great use of words there! ‘A mu ...
  • Cosmium
    Oh wow. Deep story! That was a really good read, and an easy one to get drawn in ...
  • The Secret Diary of Matthew Hopkins Aged 22 & ¾
    Haha, ‘One After the Noon’, best part! Raisins where the demon had stood!? Oh ge ...
  • Iron and Oak
    Thanks guys!
  • Iron and Oak
    A few of you wanted a sequel. Well here is part two lol Also, for a visual refer ...

The May Challenge: Three Things

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Three words, many different directions, where will yours take us?

Submission Reviews

  • No Interest
    Haha, love that he named the spider.  Nice! A good read. You’ve got a little hum ...
  • Origami
    Nice, a great read!  The imagery and tone of the story worked very well. You pai ...
  • The Commerce of Ark Arachnids
    First off, excuse my absence for the week. Back to your reply for my comments, l ...
  • An Atlantic Storm
    Again, thanks for the read and feedback, guys :)
  • Rotten Possum
    Lol! A fun read!  I really liked this. I guess the title kind of gave away that ...
  • Zippo
    Nice, nice! A good read. I hope all three make it out.  Like Alec, I had a hard ...
  • Sex Appeal
    No problem :)  Oh don't worry about it; it isn't worth changing and I kind of re ...

The April Challenge: Welcome to the Liar's Club

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Have you ever told an accidental lie that spiralled way out of control...

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