davevito's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 15

Last Review: 1/19/2017

What Happened on White Chapel Avenue

Mystery

Detective Mendoza is taking on one of the biggest cases of his career with littl ...more »

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  • Chapter One
    I like this a lot. Nick is a great character and his partner jenkins is interest ...
  • Prologue
    This is an interesting way to start out a book. I like the way you explain addic ...

One of the Empty

Sci Fi/Fantasy

How can you save the world when you don't even know what you are?

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  • Chapter Two
    okay so the plot of this was interesting. i like where you went with this. poor ...
  • Chapter One
    i enjoyed this chapter a lot. this story has a lot of potential. the only real p ...

The Grim Theft

Sci Fi/Fantasy

“We were sentenced to Hell, Valerie. This is one step up from it, but essentiall ...more »

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  • Chapter 4
    You are just doing a fantastic job with this story. that's all i can really say. ...
  • Chapter 3
    I am enjoying this story the more i read it. Its well thought out and thoroughly ...
  • Chapter 2
    I am enjoying this story so far, purgatory is interesting to say the least.   Th ...
  • Chapter 1
    I love the premise of this story. Ive always been fascinated with the idea of re ...

Soul Hosts

Sci Fi/Fantasy

In the kingdom of Helos, it's illegal to be a sorcerer. Fifteen-year-old orphan ...more »

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New Age Light

Sci Fi/Fantasy

The fifth and final story in 'The Lifelight Series'. Something new looms on the ...more »

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Dream Invaders

Sci-Fi

After having their planet invaded by humans, Blank and Creeper volunteer to go u ...more »

Project Reviews

  • This is a very interesting concept. I enjoy the idea of aliens posing as humans ...

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The Foster Home

Teen

A place where love happens, sanity is lost, and things just don't make sense: Th ...more »

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  • I found this story to be entertaining to say the least. It caught my attention f ...

Adventure of Arin

Action/Adventure

A fantasy novel involving ancient riddles leading to a hidden city. Taking place ...more »

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