grafiksad's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 2256

Last Review: 8/19/2017

The August Challenge: The Dinner Party

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Project Reviews

  •   El Canadian, that is sooo funny. Free time comes with not being in management ...
  •   I guess Alec must be on vacation or he fell down last Friday night on his way ...
  •   Moving on... please try to leave a comment after reading a story. Every opinio ...
  •   Okay, I guess I will try again. My sub seems a little un-involved? Ambiguous? ...
  •   Got my title:  Beat to a Jelly    That is so awesome!    Beat to a Jelly?    S ...

Submission Reviews

  • Tasty Morsels
      At the halfway point, the phrasing felt somewhat dated. Then, when I saw the y ...
  • A Family Dinner
      I guess this is the start of a story? It does not seem to culminate in any way ...
  • Group Therapy
      Thanks so much for the help, Sue. No matter how clean you think you have it, t ...
  • Group Therapy
       LOU, you are very kind. I did not know what to think about this sub. One minu ...
  • Sleep 2
      So, was this the 2500 word thingy cut down? Feel like you have half a novel he ...
  • Sleep 1
      Hey LOU.   Being as I do not read a whole lot, I do not have much reference to ...
  • The Rising
    you're
  • The Rising
      Tony-meister!    I am not sure how to take this piece, tone-wise. It wavers be ...
  • Time's Justice
    'caviar crowd'? 'Lord's lucky'? 'Thrifty nickles'? 'Snob snots'? 'Chosen Crotchs ...
  • Time's Justice
      Upon reading this, I realize 'Ah, Sue is back'.  The style, the well crafted d ...