jblane's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 22

Last Review: 10/14/2017

The October Challenge: The A-Z of Fear

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Welcome, welcome, welcome...

Submission Reviews

  • Underground Railroad Adventure
    Overall a great piece. I think you lose the dialect/tone of the piece in a few p ...
  • Anterograde
    Well, that's embarrassing. Anterograde, not antegrade. Again, assuming my discla ...
  • Anterograde
    I hate to be that guy but, antegrade*. I double check with the internet just to ...
  • Body of water
    This is dark. And good. And dark. And not in a bad way. But there's always room ...
  • Sophia's Saviour
    Are phobias proper nouns? The capitalization throws me off. Might be nitpicky. A ...
  • The Abyss
    I really like the setup. A normal man in a normal place with an oddity. It doesn ...
  • Athazagoraphobia
    Chris,  Thanks for the detailed feedback. I'll explain here in hopes you or a fu ...

The August Challenge

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Flash Fiction

Submission Reviews

  • First and Last
    The very same.  I see you've managed to concoct yet another droll and morbid tal ...

The July Challenge

General

A challenge this month to find out where we want to end up!

Submission Reviews

  • Big Fish
    There's a lot that I liked about this. It's got a lot of voice and humor in it. ...

The June Challenge

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A longer challenge this month to hone our writing skills

Submission Reviews

The Steampunk Writing Challenge

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Write a short scene (max 500 words) that incorporates one or more key elements o ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • The Tinkerer
    Thanks for the great feedback! I've made some changes based on your comments. I ...
  • Teacher (Revised)
    Devious! I like it.  One point of potential confusion/clarification: Why "is it ...