msb5h's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 3

Last Review: 11/20/2017

The November Challenge: Disappear

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What if it wasn't there any more? Then what would happen?

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  • Incomplete
    really liked the overall flow.. i thought it was well written and kept me engage ...

The October Challenge: The A-Z of Fear

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Welcome, welcome, welcome...

Submission Reviews

  • Illogical Proof
    Thanks Alec for providing the feedback! yes need to work on dialogue... am petty ...
  • Illogical Proof
    Thanks Duncan. appreciate your feedback. I agree about the inconsistency. I reme ...