nightingale_046's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 83

Last Review: 9/30/2011

The Last One - Competition

General

What will you do when you are the last one?

Project Reviews

  • who won?

Falling

Teen

Read if ever went thruogh drama as bad as this.

Submission Reviews

The BBQ Challenge

General

Write a scene taking place at a BBQ where all is not what it seems.

Submission Reviews

  • the barbecue
    It's catchy because of the rhyming and easy to read and short. Work on your spel ...
  • Hot Dogs and Observations
    I think it needs dialogue and humour or romance. Just add something. And there's ...

ADOPT A PLOT BUNNY 2

General

I mean, it's a bunny, you don't want to just kill it and put into a stew (Part 2 ...more »

The Poets Consortium

Experimental

CALLING ALL POETS!!! This project is for poets, by poets. It's a place where poe ...more »

Submission Reviews

  • Puzzled
    I'm sorry. i feel like you're ryhming for the sake of ryhming not because you wr ...

The Picture/Sentence Challenge

General

Finish the scene evoked by this picture and sentence in 343 words.

Submission Reviews

Allison Wonderland

Teen

Welcome to the teenage wonderland: everything from rebellion to self-destruction ...more »

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Quotes(:

Entertainment

Pick a quote, submit it.

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The Alpha Omega Writing Challenge

General

Create a world. Then destroy it. All in 300 words.

Submission Reviews

  • The Castle
    cut out "whispered" and "then" and make the second more clearer with what you're ...
  • The Master's Touch
    i love your description, imagination and voice! but, the dragon's a bit odd and ...
  • Death By Twinkie
    i liked my surprised when i realised this wasn't a human. lol
  • You're My World
    Tone/Voice: i think you've changed you're voice. at the beginning, it was myster ...

Drake Fang City

Romance

"Paint me a hurricane, write me a flood... build me a city of desire and blood.. ...more »

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The Girl Dressed in Blue Light

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Can John save his family without losing everything he loves?

Submission Reviews

  • Prologue
    this is the start of a good story and i know it's a good story when i can't sto ...