roninshinobi's Reviews

Number of Reviews: 25

Last Review: 2/23/2011

B-FIVE

Thriller/Suspense

Alexa Martinez is willing to do anything to protect those she loves, but will Al ...more »

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  • Chapter 2
    Second chapter fast paced as well,and still holds the readers attention,so far s ...
  • Chapter 1
    An excellant start, plenty of mystery and menace to make the reader want to know ...

PATIENT X

Action/Adventure

Turned into a manchurian candidate by experiments performed on him at Camp Hero ...more »

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  • What you see below is the old story before I rewrit it posted it here by acciden ...

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  • patient x
    this is the first rewrite so hopefully it is a bit better.
  • patient x
    thanks for the feedback it has helped a lot, while the story may not be especial ...

EnRaged: The Story of the Rage Virus - The Journals - Book One

Horror

EnRaged: The Story of the Rage Virus - The Journals - Book One is Copyright © 20 ...more »

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Triangle love (on indefinite hiatus)

Romance

An enthusiastic high schooler falls so much in love with a girl , he will do any ...more »

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Hell Bound

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Temperance Cynclayre's fate is tied against her better judgement with a charisma ...more »

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  • Chater One: Temperance
    Once again this is good, you need to write more, what you need to look for is a ...
  • Prologue
    The pace and flow of this is good and holds the readers attention, plenty of des ...

Project Ditto

Sci Fi/Fantasy

Civil war is a war between people once allied. It starts when one group of peopl ...more »

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AFTER THE HEART IS BROKEN

Short Story

wHAT HAPPENS AFTER THE FILM ONCE WERE WARRIORS

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  • stanza one
    Thank you for your comments , the f-bomb is consistent with the way Jake talks, ...

The Travel Scene Challenge

General

Write a short scene (max. 200 words) that includes a character traveling somewhe ...more »

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